|Reviews for My Husky Kaiser|
| Ein Storm chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
This needs to be put on Fanfiction press...
There's lack of detail, and lack of description...lack of pretty much everything!
Commas need to be put in the right place, as well as capital letters.
For example, Mr Smith should be- Mr. Smith
Unless your making a newer version of it, (for example the girl in Marley and Me who got stabbed) gets a dog or some sort. then yes, that's a Fanfiction.
In this case, it's not.
| BellaRose55 chapter 2 . 4/11/2009
This has nothing to do with Marley and Me. You should post this in the misc section. You should also proofread. I understand if you have a few mistakes, but you have way too many.
| Lindir's Ghost chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Um ... you really need to go over the grammar in this story. You need to review your use of full-stops (or lack of), and your use of commas, as well. Capital letters are also an issue in this story.
You may want to consider putting this story on fan fiction. net's sister site, fiction press. net, as this is not a fanfiction at all. A fan fiction has to be based on the original story, using either the characters or the setting. This story is completely independant of Marley & Me, except it's about a dog. Also, a Husky in Texas? Isn't it a bit hot for a snow dog?
| Voxxx chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
This is utter crap.
You digrace the name of the original book. -.-;
| halocrumber chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
You're a very good writer. I love these kinds of stories. I noticed you were the only one who has written a story for Marley and Me. I'm in the process of reading it right now. You don't get very many reviews, do you? I love getting reviews, and I review every single story, not to mention chapter, that I read. You should keep writing on this story, eventually, people will notice you're the only for this series, and figure you are worth checking out. Write a few more chapters, I'll be back!
| ColoursInMotion chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Poor Candice, It's sucks what you have to move (trust me!)
This's such a sweet story, UPDATE SOON! :P