|Reviews for I'm With You|
| Anodythe chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
I wanted to cry at the beginning, then in the middle and finally at the end *sniffle* Any more coming? I'd like to know more about this young Autobot.
| Trapped in Reality chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I'm sorry to say that "you" stories are against the rules and so is posting the story text entirely in bold. Perhaps you can edit it and replace the chapter? To seperate the lyrics from the story, I suggest italicizing the lyrics. I see a few usage and spelling errors. Some of the writing was hard to understand, like the part about the virus injectors.
Aside from all that, the idea is interesting and should be continued. There were many blanks that could be filled, like how the OC looks and how Jazz came back. Pretty good for a first piece.
| Starscream's Amethyst chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
This was good. Hope u update soon.