Reviews for Caught Out
Natasha Cantrell chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I like this a lot! This is more realistic when it comes to Thirteen and Cuddy I think. Most stories have them falling into each other's arms in the first chapter, which doesn't sound realistic at all. It wouldn't happen like that. There would be a lot of hesitation on both parts. Great job!
Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Well-written but I didn't really like it as much as your otehr fics.
librarymouse chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Great story. I like it.
krisana22 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Great oneshot. I would love to see how 13 tries to get it all back.
elliott ashes chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
I really like the character interactions. There were a few grammar mistakes, mostly missing commas, but from what I've seen from your other pieces you've got a very good sense of grammar and you will probably see the places I am referring to if you look it over again. I enjoyed the dialogue, definitely in-character. The story doesn't feel finished, but I noticed it doesn't say complete. Are you going to continue it? I will definitely read more if you do. You've got an absorbing writing style.