Reviews for Living in Sin
SwordFeather chapter 5 . 4/19/2010
Still thinking Hibarix Rachael here. Fran...well, he'll probably do something to the couple to fustrate them, no?
SwordFeather chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
I. Love. This. LOVE!~!3 3 3 sfx*spaz*

THIS IS SO GOD Good god this is great! Loves! ok now I'll write like a normal person. Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters; but I just can't not review! It's really quite amazing how you have all these names of places/brands/things etc in here! Like you did extensive research! Amazing! I'm extremely awestruck. Since this doesn't sound like a romance type of fic, I'm not going to suggest any pairings BUT I LOVE THIS STORY! really, I can't say it enough hehe :D
Mayorin chapter 5 . 4/19/2010
LOL ur author notes at the end of the fic is always interesting to read...and even though the fic ended somewhat depressing(srry) it was still good enough a fic~ please continue~~ and LOL! the comparing the sharky to a fruit bit. LOL! a gatling gun!xD
1honeydelight chapter 2 . 4/12/2010
this story seems to take a lot of time and thought! I LIKE IT
Miyosan chapter 4 . 4/12/2010
uwa! thnks for updating~ I almost forgot this what this story was about until i read cloud guardian. Anywayz, awesomeness. And you actually did geographical and historical planning and research! *claps~* LOL Lussuria is lovesome here. And caffe e latte~ LOL.
QingHeCha chapter 2 . 5/4/2009
Will there be romance here? You should! You should consider it! For all the female fans out there

Also, make the chapters longer! Geez... should be like... 30 pages. Just put a lot of spaces and stuff!
LardYBar chapter 1 . 5/4/2009 was your idea -.-

Anyways! Funnyfunny, well-written. Yes, I don't get it because I don't read this manga. But I can still tell that you're intelligent... so good! Wahaha...

...I can still tell... so... ha
Stop'nGo Girl chapter 2 . 12/30/2008


I always wondered how Fran got into the Varia. Interested in how you're going to write about both of them!

can't wait for the next chapter!
Ace Frost chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
xxxTalia-Chanxxx chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
OCs that seem to have (original) personalities? No pairings? Humorous background stories? Tell me when your going to update!
XxXChibiBunniXxX chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Yea! I like your story alot so far! Fran is adorable and Rachel seems cool as well :)

Please update soon!