|Reviews for Sparks|
| Aims27 chapter 18 . 9/5/2014
Ok this doesn't make sense, the part with Bella, when she is walking to Edward and sees them (Tanya and Edward) kissing she freezes but then she always hears "my job here is done" but then still jumps to him already cheating. I am sorry if I hear a girl say that her job was done after her looking at Edward then Bella, I wouldn't assume that it was real then, I would just flat out ask if it was real or if it was forced, Bella can't be that stupid to all of a sudden jump even after the ex saying that...I would have worded that part differently if you wanted Bella to not trust him
| Theindividualdifference chapter 47 . 3/2/2014
Loved this so much!3
| Pia Athena BlackHeart chapter 47 . 7/24/2013
your plot is really good i liked the plot. there are a few mistakes here & there like the pregnancy thing. you can only know the sex of the baby in 5th month but determi ned it in like 2nd month itself. and then the timeline of the story too and jacob taking her to i Italy & all is a little far fetched i mean they are just 18 & still in school so guns & all are a bit far fetched i feel
| EdwardAndBellaForever chapter 9 . 7/10/2013
Your ellipses are too long.
| Motherof8 chapter 47 . 4/21/2013
Cute story, even with the crazy kidnapping stunt. Thanks
| Motherof8 chapter 44 . 4/21/2013
Why on earth wouldn't they call the police?
| Motherof8 chapter 43 . 4/21/2013
Was enjoying the story till this chapter. Come on. High school seniors, with guns, taking Bella to Italy? A little far fetched? Lol
| Motherof8 chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
| blank chapter 47 . 3/9/2013
:) great story!
| blank chapter 36 . 3/9/2013
no offense, but isn't it isle esme?
| blank chapter 34 . 3/9/2013
| blank chapter 32 . 3/9/2013
wow. i can't believe...
well, anyways, i luv this story!
| blank chapter 23 . 3/9/2013
HOW COULD U? DON'T U DARE KILL HIM OFF!
| blank chapter 21 . 3/9/2013
this is awesome!
| blank chapter 19 . 3/9/2013