Reviews for Promise on the Festival Night
MistressWinowyll chapter 5 . 1/6/2009
Great chapter. I can understand about boys not wanting to get off play systems...

Lucy would make one hell of a strategist. Her ability to anticipate and overcome are top notch. I think she's so adorable, despite her whole dark side, that she wants to make him her whole world...yet, it's kind of scary that she has absolutely no other outlet.

Your Mistress.
animeaddict13 chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
Aw! So cute! Update soon! _
GalaxyUntouchable chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
This is a great story. Keep up the great work.
He Who Rules With an Iron Hoof chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
For me this is suspenseful, I keep wondering when Lucy is going to 'snap' and kill his father and sister or something.

Gemme my 'My Snow Girl' update!
Heliosion chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
Good move on the last part there or people would feel obliged to remind you about the rules. When they are older cool but right now he he. But seriously a time skip is gonna be needed soon or better yet slaughter his father and sister and make him have to live with Yuka he he he
animeaddict13 chapter 4 . 1/4/2009
YES! It's about time that someone uploaded a romantic KoutaxLucy story! Please, please, PLEASE let them end up together! Good job so far! _
Mistress Ayako chapter 3 . 1/3/2009
LOL Hilarious. And I live in this big place with MILLIONS of rude humans called New York City. Come and find me and have fun with the slaughter. LOL. I'm happy to say I'm not as biased as the story portrays humans. I want to be Lucy's friend too, but I'm sorry voices in Lucy's head, but I persist you must go. If you don't, you'll take control of Lucy when Kouta makes a mistake and then she'll kill him and then she'll kill thousands of people because she killed hima and then she'll kill herself, and that would be disastrous! (What would happen if Lucy's voices made her Kill Kouta?)
Mistress Ayako chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
I was watching this on TV a half a year ago, and then... my remote stopped working. By the time my parents sought fit to fix it, of course the series was off on demand, and I had forgotten the title. I like the way you're molding this story! I guess I'm with Lucy on this one, I actually had vivid images of her killing Yuka. I guess it's the affect of my mind from the series. Do you intend to illuminate the more gruesome parts of Lucy's nature or try to get her medication for the voices in her head?
how chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
I can't wait to see what happens when she meets another diclonius. on another note will lucy ever meet Aiko Takada from the ova.
X the Black chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
So close to his death, oh so very close! *sigh* anyway. I hope you continue writing this story, it has given me great pleasure to read such excellent writing. Please continue swiftly.
2lzy2login chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
Fantastic I eagerly await the next chapter.
Straximo chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
i like
piercing kage kitsune chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
I'm verry interested on what lucy is going to do and say to kouta now that she has him all to her self.
Heliosion chapter 4 . 12/30/2008
Again this has so much going for it. Will she or wont she kill someone soon? Will this time skip or not? So much for me to think and wonder about. Not bad at all. You certainly trapped me in your maze of interest
Zashire chapter 4 . 12/30/2008
Very nice chapter!

And to the reviewers before this: I know it's rated M but I highly doubt any of that, well, 'stuff' will happen for a while. Remember, they're still kids. x_x

I will be looking forward to your next update. Happy New Years!

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