Reviews for The Six Paths of Creation
Bowl of Slightly Hateful Rice chapter 5 . 9/5/2009
Story 910

Portrayal 1010

Grammar 810

Super Awesome Writing Grade What ever comes before A plus

good job
Jerrac chapter 5 . 7/31/2009
Pretty good story.

But that last scene was bad. With the ninja paranoia, there is no way Sasuke would be left under light guard. They'd have at least two ANBU there at all times, one likely hidden inside the room.

Also, why would Yugito be the one to get pregnant? She's a jinchuuriki. Having her pregnant pretty much destroys a huge portion of her fighting strength. The Raikage wouldn't do that. Also, even if they were trying to get some of the Nibi's abilities in the Uchiha heir, they would worry about the Nibi canceling out the sharingen.

Anyway, just my thoughts.

Hope you are still writing this story.
Negima Uzumaki chapter 5 . 7/24/2009
Sweet fic so far, I like how you got Yugito to get knocked up with Sasuke's kid, though I wonder what would happen if she meet Naruto sometime, would she want to jump his bones?
HolyKnight5 chapter 5 . 7/14/2009 hope for your muse to revive on this?
ShadowFoxKage chapter 5 . 7/1/2009
hm with this story I wonder if Naruto could gain a body who is a vessel like his original body. Also it ould be rather interesting if he ended up with a female body or two.

Please continue this story.
noname381195 chapter 5 . 7/1/2009
Interesting story; interesting ending for this chapter. It's new.
noname381195 chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
"A gloomy Naruto was just as natural as an emo clown."

Didn't you know? With an individuals profession being a clown, they become very unstable and become a risk to themselves. You can find many reports across the world wide web of clowns being suicidal victims.
exomatt chapter 5 . 6/25/2009
fantastic story. Please keep it up
Ashans23 chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
[Somewhere in Oto]

-Lord Orochimaru! We have some exceptional news from Kabuto! The Rinnigan has been discovered in a young boy!

Hebi-teme quickly start laughting at that news:

-Kukukukuku screw the Sharingan i want the Rinnigan! Tell me the name of this kid!

-Is name is Ashans my lord!... XD

LOL XD love your idea!
FTFCHRIS chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
One thing i've always despised about the manga and most fanfics is that through one freaking meeting he considers Haku a precious person. Always makes me sick. In this Naruto even called him one of his most precious or whatever.

Also the fact that he let murdering, pillaging rapists go scott free? Okay... what a wonderful person he is. So what's he going to say to all those kids whose parents would get murdered or raped. "I'm sorry i'm so fucking stupid" ?
Cenright chapter 5 . 5/21/2009
I always thought that I hated stories with the Rin'negan bloodline being Naruto's, but after reading two other stories of yours, I agreed to give this a try, expecting to hate it. For the first time, I enjoyed a Naruto-Rin'negan story, and am actually wanting to see more. You do great work.
Aerial Atom chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
WOW that was unexpected but I can see the possiblity of this happening. I fully enjoy your fic and would like to see more. I do have a question though. will the Six Paths visit Naruto when he has all realms and tell him of the ablities of the realms or will he learn what they do as he gets them. Another question is if Naruto will learn of Peins abilities or not. I hope to see another update of this unique fic.
Orchamus chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
kyuubi shadow chapter 5 . 5/6/2009
Damn yugito don't do it
Cera Symmetry chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
great chapter!

but you kinda made a mistake in Naruto's wording of Haku's thought, "he loved you like a son" i think you meant father but... o well

loved the chapter!
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