|Reviews for The Words Written on his Chest|
| Crumby chapter 10 . 10/30/2012
I loved the thing with Larry coming back at the end. I also liked that Chuck didn't kill Sarnov, and thought it was realistic that Casey would do it. Great chapter.
| Crumby chapter 9 . 10/22/2012
Loved the line, "Is it relaxing in front of a Playstation or is it killing Sarnov, because it can't be both," and how the chapter's structured with the interrupted memory at the beginning, and the whole scene at the end. Really nicely done.
| s-david-m chapter 11 . 10/20/2012
Well written story, and compelling. Not a fate you'd wish on anyone, but it all turned out in the end.
| Crumby chapter 8 . 10/16/2012
I love how emotional the story is without many words.
| Crumby chapter 7 . 10/14/2012
Loved the details about Chuck's hair, and the fact that he writes down what's important to him.
| Crumby chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
Loved the restaurant bit, the fortune cookie, the light bulb, the contrast between Chuck's proposal and his leaving. Great chapter.
| Crumby chapter 5 . 10/7/2012
| Crumby chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
It was great to see Sarah. Poor Sarah.
| somedeepmystery chapter 11 . 7/5/2012
I just recently found this story and I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it. Yes, it was dark but it ended happily and without compromising what happened. Hmm, did that make any sense? Oh well.
Also, I wanted to let you know that I was never confused. Maybe it helps that I got to read it altogether in one shot but I was able to easily follow along between flashbacks and present time. I saw you apologizing for that in your notes so I wanted to let you know.
Thank you for sharing your story.
| Crumby chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
I loved the sense of mystery of this story. Here we learned that Chuck is seeking revenge, that he wants Sarnov. Sarah's in Virginia. And I liked the interactions with Bryce. I thought that was well done.
| Crumby chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
Great chapter. We wonder what happened to Sarah and there's a real sense of heartbreak to it. I like how it transpired in a short amount of words.
| Crumby chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I read this story before, so I know why Chuck has these "words written on his chest," but this first chapter was really intriguing. We wonder what happened, which was obviously something awful, and it really contrasts with the happiness flowing from the past Chuck and Sarah moment. Loved that scene between them, by the way. It really set a great, believable, and sweet relationship that we care for, making whatever happened that led to the tattoo even more powerful. Great chapter.
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/2/2012
I loved this fanfic !
| Tynianrex chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
Even if this fic got quite dark, its amazing how all the characters remains themselves. Really good work.
| SkylarDarcy chapter 11 . 2/22/2010
This story was perfect in every way. Well, maybe it could've been longer. ;) Love it!