Reviews for The First Daughter
Aliegator2014 chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
This is such a good story
bronzed topaz chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Very sweet. I want more now. Well done. I loved it.
Cassadilla chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Hahahaha I love that line, Bella Swan was in grave danger, again. How typical! It was good... But WAYYY too short! It's a good idea for a story, you just didn't really do it right. There needs to be more leading up to it and more afterwards. Also, you were very vague on Edward and Bella's reltationship and where they stood. I think you should continue! :)
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Loved it!
justandsimplyme chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
i loved this chapter! just what i have been looking for! the best!
Rebecca Cullen 1991 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Wow I loved this it was so sweet. I liked how you looked back and showed us a litle of what their relationship was like instead of just jumping straight in :)

Well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
what's the surprise?

ek! cliffy!
gemma loves edward chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
really good :)
EmbracingGrace1 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
hey hey hey... i need an epilogue. lol. really bad. lol. please?
AlwaysTrueToYou chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Umm, wow? This is NEW. I've never ever read that Bella is The First Daughter. Definitely new.
Twilight or Color Guard chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
that was really cute
mel chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
great story would love to read more on there realationship please wright more
Blushing Bella18 chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
good story. update soon.
simlatreshucant chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Make it to a full story man it is so nice y wont you make it into a full story man...please make it to a full story man it so nice with a little fluff man...sorry for always using man man...im just used to saying man man make it a full story man and by the way i am a girl if you are wondering man
x.Safety.Pins.x chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
This is really good you should make it into a full story
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