|Reviews for Land of Light and Shadows|
| JastaElf chapter 38 . 4/6/2005
Oh my Eru... I did NOT see that coming.
Your Legolas characterization is just plain mucking Farvelous! That is one of the most brilliant endings to a chapter I have ever, EVER read.
YOU are brilliant. I think I love you. (grin)
Thank you SO much for this incredible update-and I am SO sorry about your smack on the wrist from the Evil Empire. (mad face) Sometimes they just stun me...
Anyway, brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. Amazing and brilliant.
| Alicia Pascal chapter 38 . 4/6/2005
Oh, you are a genius!
:) Let me explain. When I read the last few chapters I 'thought' I had finally gotten my mind aorund the story, and figured what would happen next - and you managed to completely surprise me. I love it.
Along with the idea of searching for a different hiding place for Gimli (it's so obvious, now that I read about it, but the idea just never occured to me) I would never have imagined Legolas getting caught like this, nor the trick with the arrow. It's brilliant.
I got a little comfused with that thing about the sea. It's obviously some kind of mind trick - but how? I admit, since the scene was written from Dashnir's point of few getting an explanation in there is more or less impossible (besides, I love the mystery), but I would like to learn about it later.
It's a pity doesn't allow responses to reviewers anymore, for I would love to know your sources for the languages. It adds a very authentic feeling to the story.
| the-poette chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
That was the most amazing chapter I have ever read in my life! Wow...so capturing and I felt as though the floor had dissappeared from under me when I read the last sentence!
...this is too amazing!
Please, don't leave me hanging for too long.
:):):):):):):):)MANY SMILES TO YOU, BUT THEY DON'T DO YOU JUSTICE BY A LONGSHOT :):):):):):)
| Unurith chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
That is all i can say...
| Deana chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
WOW, what a chapter! Poor Legolas...how awesome that he used the arrow as a weapon! What a smart elf, LOL! PLEASE PLEASE post 39 soon! :)
| Author Gal chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
That's mean. Very, very mean. But highly enjoyable! :D
| Cloud-123 chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
oh yeah! go Legolas! hahahahaha. he so deserved that. Legolas is amazing.
| Jevvica chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
Go Legolas! I am so happy, finally, at long last, a chapter about Legolas and Gimli! Now...if they could just stop getting caught and bleeding everywhere...
| brynnevan chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
Yay for Legolas! Stick him good!
Oh, I hope everything turns out all right for him and Gimli.
| evrouw chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
I was cheering out loud those last few lines. WONDERFUL!
But please, don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
| Lamiel chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
Yes! Yes! Legolas ROCKS! I knew Dashnir underestimated him, and I was grinning all while he was contemplating the impossibility of Legolas making it to the lava beds at all, much less while carrying Gimli, much less while carrying Gimli AND being injured. Ha!
And then the way he led him in, got him to drop his guard - that was masterful. I was really concerned for Legolas then: his weakness was so real. Doubtless it WAS real, but he made it serve his purpose. Oh yeah!
Dashnir played his part very well, though. The way he appealed to Legolas' loyalty to Gimli, with the image of the carrion birds taking him, was extremely well done. I was actually afraid that it would be too much for Legolas, weakened as he was. Which just shows that I underestimated him too, I guess.
I love how smart and complex your villains are. They are real characters in their own right, intelligent and crafty enough to match against our heroes. Dashnir's only real failing here was his arrogance, and his assumption about what an Elf was capable of. And he can't really be faulted for his ignorance, because he hasn't had all that much experience with Elves. Heck, even if he had I don't know how much it would help him. Legolas is pretty remarkable even for an Elf.
The sea-longing was an interesting touch. Extremely evocative, and a poignant reminder of everything that Legolas faces. It was especially powerful to show such a reaction in a Man who had never seen the sea - similar to Tolkien's description with Frodo in the house of Tom Bombadil.
But even having taken Dashnir out, Legolas is still facing the rest of his men. How is he going to get out of this one? Oh, it is a terrible thing to leave us on such a cliff-hanger when I know you'll be turning your attention to your other excellent stories now. But I do hope that you'll be able to return to this one soon. I don't know how much more suspense I can take.
| AM chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
Thanks for update.
Read this scrolling down to enjoy the suspense and to keep grumbling/muttering/swearing to a minimum.
Doesn't FF realize the fun of reading review responses?
| Alma's Muse chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
Once again an outstanding chapter. I love the intense loyalty between Legolas and Gimli. I can't help but be reminded of your story, 'Beyond this World' whenever I read of Legolas' refusal to accept the possibility of Gimli's death and Gimli's effort to console him. Legolas' decision to leave Gimli was a hard but necessary choice. I'm positive this experience will stay with the both of them for a long time.
You have very interesting, complex original characters. I really enjoy the way you flesh out their character with thoughts, motives and impulses. They're very convincing and interact well with the LOTR characters.
Your stories are always a joy to read, Thundara. I'm happy to see your update and looking forward to seeing more. The review response issue is disappointing but there is a solution for everything. Emails and personal websites are wonderful things. :)
| shie1dmaidenofrohan chapter 38 . 4/5/2005
We're seriously not allowed to do reviewer responses anymore? That thoroughly sucks. :(
Once again, great chapter. You really had me fooled when Legolas fell because of the arrow. And it's nice that someone finally gave Dashnir what's coming to him. I'm getting rather impatient to hear about Aragorn and Eomer again, though.
| Alicia Pascal chapter 37 . 4/2/2005
Halleluja I finally caught up with the reading!
I have been moving thrice since I first started reading this story, and I have been caught by it from the start. Now for the third time I started reading from the start again, and finally made it through to the point where I can actually write a review.
I haven't read any of the other reviews, and don't want to do it, since I want to give my own thoughts and opinions, undiluted, so I hope you wil bear with me if I repeat something that has been said before.
The short version of what I want to say is: I LOVE IT!
The whole story idea is fascinating. It's funny, it has wit, intelligence, suspence, a complicated storyline, ...and it keeps the reader on the edge. I love the way the reader learns only a little at a time, just enough to make me curious what come next, just enough to get addicted to the story.
The facinating thing is that everything is so logical. One step causes the other, and still it's difficult to guess what will happen next. That's a perfect mix.
The characters are alive, and they are individuals. You show good understanding of the character and middle Earth and love for them all. It shows and makes the reading a pleasure.
Often I laugh, especially at some of the Legolas/Gimli interaction, but the humor always lies in the situation, while the characters keep their dignity. That balance is something rarely found in fanfic, and shows again what a jewel this story is.
You also got the style of speech perfect. The phrasing and choice of words is just as one would expect from the characters. Often I read some passages several times in a row, just because I enjoyed the elegance so much.
And I like everyone of your original characters, even the villains. okay, Ashbad and Dashnir I might not like that much, as a person, but as a character, they are just wonderful. It's not the simple black and white scheme, but nice shades of gray, which makes it far more interesting.
I would really like to give some constructive criticism, but it's hard to find something to criticise. Occasional typos ans mistakes in grammar don't really count.
I could bring up the fact that my interpretation of elves is a bit different, and I at first found the description a bit too mystical and magical (like elves hearing constant sound of nature rocks for example), but that also works so perfectly in this story, the connection with the song being such a good and logical thing that even that difference of interpretation doesn't matter anymore.
Thank you for this wonderful story, and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter(s).
I'll try to be more vigilant when new chapters come out, and with less at a time to work with I might be able to give a more detailed review.