|Reviews for The Fox and the Former Hokage|
| Oblivion196 chapter 10 . 1/18
This is great plz continue this!
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/18/2016
Cool story please don't stop!
| agnar chapter 2 . 9/2/2016
This fic seems to highlight the very worst of time travel fics. Hey, lets go back in time to fix things, but lets not actually, ya know, FIX anything so the time line doesn't get corrupted!
Fucks sake, she saw Naruto was fucking emaciated in Wave! But she does exactly fuckall about it! giving him advice, or making sure he has enough food or inviting him over for some fucking decent meals isn't going to fucking ruin the timeline!
Making sure he's better trained and in better shape before all these dangerous missions is NOT going to ruin the fucking timeline!
But no, instead we get Naruto left completely on his own really, for longer and longer times, your timeline of Naruto contact gets longer each time its mentioned. Why not just fucking wait until he returns from his mostly useless training trip?
Fuck, yoshiko is even fucking setting Naruto up to again rely entirely on Jiraiya for his training, and while he got some training there, it wasn't NEARLY what it should've been. She didn't even fucking bother mentioning how to use shadow clones to him!
She came back because shit went horribly, so her plan is to... allow shit to still go horribly apparently with only 2 changes? Make sure the council doesn't forbid Naruto marrying (which is ridiculous, laws cannot be legal if aimed at ONE person) and make sure sasuke and sakura don't kill Naruto.
Ah, forget the thousands killed by Atkatsuki and their fallout Madara! That can still happen, right?
Pointless damned fic!
| my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/2/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
| my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
| Sexy Fox Girl chapter 1 . 6/8/2016
awesome fanfic i cant believe i didnt find it sonner
| WHCnelson chapter 9 . 4/26/2016
update this please when you can
| Elijah chapter 10 . 3/29/2016
This entire story was absolutely amazing!. I want to go on some more, it kind of has me wishing that story idea could given to Kishimoto or something like that, so that it could be made into a possible movie or one of the episodes in the series. Although the way that this story seems to have an epic vibe to it makes it seem like it should be a movie. PLEASE! Do some more chapters.
| Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
Why is the Naruto fandom so riddled with Harems? Do you writers think so little of woman that they would share their man with someone else? Is it a lack of ability to write something that isn't smut? Romance in and of itself is not bad, nut all these harems are ridiculous and take away from the greatness that is Naruto Fandom.
| setzer231 chapter 10 . 6/19/2015
Amazing work cant wait for the next chapter
| rexamisprime chapter 10 . 4/5/2015
Rilly love this story. I know it has been over a year since you have updated but I still love it and hope you will find your inspiration agin. I think you should have all the (sorry cant spell lol) jenchuiki in the leaf meet. Naruto and bee are already good friends, naruto and yoshico (once agin cant spell today sorry) are mated and linked so thay are good, naruto and fuu have a lot in common so that shouldent be to bad, but yugito will be the hard one.:(. But good luck and I hope to see chapter 11 soon.
| AnonymousCritic212 chapter 10 . 3/31/2015
Well, I have to say that, although awkward, I have enjoyed reading this and hope to see an update. Later!
| AnonymousCritic212 chapter 9 . 3/31/2015
May I say that this was a rather confusing chapter if not for the fact that I knew exactly what was going on. Still, I liked it... minus the overly painful Sakura interrogation scene. I don't like seeing any woman, even women like Tayuya, treated harshly.
| AnonymousCritic212 chapter 8 . 3/31/2015
Whoa... I never even heard about some of those characters and now I can't help yet feel as though you just made into the future husband of many more women. Oh my... Got to say that at least he has a big heart full of love.
| AnonymousCritic212 chapter 5 . 3/31/2015
Honestly, besides the explicitness, I am enjoying the relatively realistic relationship development. I kinda wish I could see the return from the 2 to 3 year trip to see him get married.