|Reviews for jealous of your cigarette|
| zombie toast chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Damn that was...damn. You captured the scene so nicely in just four little paragraphs. The imagery was amazing and...whoa. all I have to say was that this was extremely amazing and you got me interested at the title alone and then you killed me with the story itself. Great job
| Lover of Angelus chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Like the last lines a lot. Very good use of language.
| Shkira chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
"you breathe through it"
| Liralen Li chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
M... "two lips, a snake's kiss"... yum. I love your phrasings, as ever.
| Crysania Fay chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Well that was depressingly sweet. I always loved the thought that Gin-chan loved Ban. Nice one shot!