Reviews for jealous of your cigarette
zombie toast chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Damn that was...damn. You captured the scene so nicely in just four little paragraphs. The imagery was amazing and...whoa. all I have to say was that this was extremely amazing and you got me interested at the title alone and then you killed me with the story itself. Great job
Lover of Angelus chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Like the last lines a lot. Very good use of language.
Shkira chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
"you breathe through it"
Liralen Li chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
M... "two lips, a snake's kiss"... yum. I love your phrasings, as ever.
Crysania Fay chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Well that was depressingly sweet. I always loved the thought that Gin-chan loved Ban. Nice one shot!