Reviews for Haunted
KimiD chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
WOW ~ DAMN girl you had me panting... say it already! That was GREAT! LOVE IT! Man I was holding my breath,,, *heavy pant* finally I can breathe. A little confused on a couple of things... how did he get in the bedroom that was locked? it does not say he broke in or anything, and traffic? hmmmm chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
gosh, i've read this like . . . 3 times now, i love it! it'd be cool if you could make this into more than a one shot, a longer story. but don't worry, i loved it.
Charlotte1993 chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
Good job and damn was that intense.
Kirby-Chan-X3 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
hey is this based off the song haunted by evanescence?
Jayleen Cullen Whitlock Hale chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
wow i had to read this a few times to understand this! pssh its coolio 5 stars
icant chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
HAHA i liked that, i loved bella's stubborness!
CocoaSampson chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
I really liked this story. You did a great job of describing Bella's confusion and pain throughout the story vividly. I especially liked the last two lines of dialouge, about her taking so long because of traffic. I thought that was widdy. Great job!
Countess Rivers chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Very atmospheric! I liked the tension between the characters, Bella's stubborness.

Good job!