|Reviews for Courage Under Fire|
| XxSanitariumxX chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
That's... not exactly how I saw Krystal reacting. And making her barren!? That's cruel. She's the last of her kind and she can't even have a kid? You could probably make something out of that though. While I do feel Krystal's character might be off, you seem to have nailed Fox spot on. For a minute I thought Fara was the mother. Looking back, I can kinda see why Krystal would be paranoid after the Angler thing.
| XxSanitariumxX chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Bah, fuck blaze, I don't care how sympathetic he is, he still works fire a tyrant. Nice first chapter, on to the next ones.
| bryan mccloud chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
the one thing is that they never mention who is kyla's mother...lol.
from what i see this chapter is not really that good but also not really that bad...lol.(average)
| dracos19 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
Loved the story so far, really hope you can come through and make the other chapters for it, really excited to see where this story ends up going too.
| Irish Redd chapter 2 . 1/19/2009
Man, I'm sorry I took so long to review this Kavi; both to you, and to myself, as I've clearly deprived myself of some quality reading here.
There's just something about this story that screams finesse; the story unfolds in a logical and clever fashion, and characterization is top-notch. I especially liked the intentional typos to emphasize one of the kids' accents. Descriptions are quick but ideal, as they never over-describe or become redundant.
There was a hiccup or two when you introduced characters in the first chapter; describing someone as exactly what they are (for example, "a teenage black fox girl") sort of takes the fun away from imagination. But you seemed to fix that in the second chapter, so no biggie there. Speaking of which though, what happened with the entirely underlined format of the second chapter? Just curious.
Honestly, I'm interested to see where this story goes; not to sound like an english teacher, but you've picked a very original plot line, and with the core quality already in place, I'm know you'll unfold it very well.
Best of luck Kavi!
| dragonwarriormaster chapter 2 . 1/9/2009
Another great chapter. Fox is kind of a pedo, eh? I can't wait to see how Kyla's crazy scheme works out, and to hear why Krystal gave her up.
| dragonwarriormaster chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Great story! I love some of the little details that many other authors would have overlooked, like the oil that Kyla. Great cliffhanger ending, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
| xXWingedWerefoxXx chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Kyla reminds me of me. I do that kind of stuff. Keep writing, I love the the story. Some people who haven't written stories think that people don't write enough, but this must have been long.
| starfoxluver chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Interesting story, keep it up! ()b