|Reviews for Energy|
| DyingStar chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Did Azula and Ty Lee have a baby? XD Sorry...just geeking out at the thought. I liked these little snippets. They were concise but still loaded with effective imagery. Noice...
| The One And Only Lobster chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
I see what you mean about being able to read it both forwards and backwards. I read it forwards, then backwards, then forwards and backwards again, and it gained something each time. Very well done.
| Measured chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
I love the surreal nature of this. The thick, dream-like prose is really beautiful and the fact that it can read either way is a very original method.
I disagree about the M rated (mentioned in other reviews) however. Everything is very vague and non-explicit making it firmly a T rating.
Other than that, a complete aside- you might want to turn anonymous reviewing on (unless you've had issues with flaming and trolling) :D There's a lot of people too lazy to sign in or who don't have an actual account and just read. If you ban anonymous reviewing then those people can't review and well...
| Nikkel chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
That was... perplexing. I'm still a little confused, but I'll probably have to read it a couple of times through, as I usually do with your stories. In a way it's a good thing, because you write so... poetically. And poems naturally take a while to understand.
And you sent shivers up my spine. You get points for that.
| chasemycars chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Very nice! I love the language used.
But I do suggest a rating change...maybe to M?