|Reviews for Deceitful Betrayal|
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/3/2013
Loving the story. It would be "hallucinogen" by the way.
| TheOneThatGotAway99 chapter 23 . 7/12/2013
Woo! I liked it! Great story, great ending. Very good work. Thank you, thank you for this story. Loved it.
| TheOneThatGotAway99 chapter 14 . 7/12/2013
Hard-light holographic chameleon cloaking tech? Brilliant! Never saw it coming! Makes it look and feel like the real deal, unless you hit the cloaking device. Blown away! Great work! Can't wait to finish reading this story.
| TheOneThatGotAway99 chapter 2 . 7/12/2013
Oh geez! I'm still trying to restart my heart after that first chapter, then finding out Raph didn't really hand him over, I almost passed-out with relief! Haha, good story, as far as I've read so far. Fairly sure I won't be finishing it tonight, however. Anyway, just wanted to give out my opinion to any who cares. On chapter two, so far a great story. Now on to three! :)
| JustineElla2 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
O...m...g... did not see that coming!
| SleepingSeeker chapter 23 . 6/4/2013
Clapclapclap! Yay! Only I wish it were longer! i really really do! But man, great job on this! i can't wait to read more from you! And I hope you get a chance to read my other stories including one called The Long Way Home (oddly enough, same title as your one chapter!)
Thanks again for shring your talent with us! xo
| SleepingSeeker chapter 22 . 6/4/2013
Oh poor Leo! This is very realistic, he went through so much of course he eventually accepted it and tried to understand but how painful that would've been for him to finally accept Raph's betrayal - how that would've broken his heart despite understanding the why of it! And of course Raph would be eager to make Leo see it never was him and he'd be so heart broken himself for thinking Leo could ever think he'd do that to him or any of them!
Oh this is so good, I'm not ready for it to end!
| SleepingSeeker chapter 21 . 6/4/2013
Poor Leo! He'd accepted his fate - accepted the deal Raph had made. And that breaks my heart for him!
| SleepingSeeker chapter 20 . 6/4/2013
Phew, and oh! Poor Leo - poor Raph!
| SleepingSeeker chapter 19 . 6/4/2013
| SleepingSeeker chapter 18 . 6/4/2013
Good job, Casey! And no, Donnie was completely in character last chapter.
| SleepingSeeker chapter 17 . 6/4/2013
| SleepingSeeker chapter 16 . 6/4/2013
Casey was fine! He really isn't stupid, you know. Tough doesn't have to equate stupid.
| SleepingSeeker chapter 15 . 6/4/2013
Oh, Don, so cold verging on the edge of darkness, held by strands of reasoning closer still to the abyss than even Raph.
| SleepingSeeker chapter 14 . 6/4/2013
Oohhhooo! My friend that was genius. Excellent! Don't you love it when readers get you inspired!?