Reviews for Deceitful Betrayal
Kanon58 chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
WHAT!? RAPH WHY? OH GAAWD THIS IS HOLY SHIT INTERESTING!
Kanon58 chapter 23 . 1/1/2015
what? WHAT. ah well it was happy end but..that was so...short! I KNEW IT ANYWAY i can see they gonna go to the building where everything started haha
Kanon58 chapter 22 . 1/1/2015
he is...still...not himself..oh no..last chapie i hope its not too short or like the end was not funny
Kanon58 chapter 21 . 1/1/2015
its really hard to trust like seriously! NOW..IMMA SEEIN A HAPPY END?! :D PLEASE DONT BREAK MY HEART
Kanon58 chapter 20 . 1/1/2015
QAQ WOW THAT WAS ONE TERRIBLE NIGHTMARE YOUR WRITING AINT MAYBE COMPLETE BUT DUDE...IT STRIKE MY HEART TEARS FLOODING! just hope a happy end!
Kanon58 chapter 19 . 1/1/2015
IM GONNA KILL YOU IF LEO JUST DIED QAQ I HATE DEATH FICS
Kanon58 chapter 18 . 1/1/2015
i thought leo gonna attack them cuz of fear about hallucinations!
Kanon58 chapter 17 . 1/1/2015
yes torture them too!
Kanon58 chapter 16 . 1/1/2015
you should have killed him and man donny that was smart
Kanon58 chapter 15 . 1/1/2015
ouch..just ouch that was creepy...cuttng eww! I DONT WANT THAT.
Kanon58 chapter 14 . 1/1/2015
I REALLY GOT TROLLED..AND I THOUGHT LEO HAD GONE MAD...the twist killed my inside hahaha!
Kanon58 chapter 13 . 1/1/2015
uh so the fakers were robot? not a clone? OAO
Kanon58 chapter 11 . 1/1/2015
yes he finally got save! but i had a feeling leo is not crazy!
Kanon58 chapter 10 . 1/1/2015
raph became so damn smart and oh no leo i wonder if you are mad or happy cuz you are going crazy
Kanon58 chapter 9 . 1/1/2015
HAHAHAHHAHA ITS GETTING MORE AND MORE GREAT! COME ON ITS WONDERFUL...raph finally fell asleep yet nightmare NO ITS A VISION! Donny you sure you trust raph now? your smart of course you do!
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