Reviews for Heat of the Moment
AltairSnow chapter 1 . 5/25
my heart was beating way tto fast as i fangirled to this. thank you.
Teacuppuppie chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
I loved how you got rid of all of that romantic crap and made them both just really...well, real, and honest. It was really satisfying. I love your writing style.
A reader chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
I know it's been years since this was published, and you must be a writing pro by now, but I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story. It is a good first SoMa fanfic.
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Love this!
angel5566yy chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Please write a second chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
That was awsome you kept them in character and it was hillarious how maka hit her dad
Mystic Fairy Tame chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Now mama. Tell me why. How did your father man get in. Stein come and get t him
SakiYuuki chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
LOL OMG that was good! I can't stop laughing! Haha! Great job here! Hope you'll write more fanfics bout SoMa(Soul X Maka)
lona.garman chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Manga753 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
That was an awsome story
It was so good I wanted it not to end :0
candie fox chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Very good
Maya chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Oh my blob That rocked but maka is not à blonde she has light Brown hair easy mistake
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
this was hands down the best soul ive read yet.
scorpioneldar chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
... what to that ending in character and all but so not the same mood
and why did she hit him he just told her he loves her?! silly woman
ahh well nice work going to see if you have more good stuff
keilifae chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Oh my god, I died at the ending. It was too funny!
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