|Reviews for FireStorm|
| The Epitome of Eccentricity chapter 9 . 1/26/2010
o.o'' That was... And odd ending. The story was- overall- confusing, hard to read, confusing, interesting, REALLY hard to read, and did I mention confusing? I like the plot, though!
An alternate ending to the non-existant sequal: The Rikudo Sennin wins, but the history of the Shinobi world was passed down from generaation to generation by one, new civilian clan. That clan would perserve the history of Shinobi by oral tradition untill one day, an estrange faux-author (read: Fan-fiction writer) wrote what happened on a website known as .
| Barranca chapter 9 . 1/26/2010
Naruto destroyed Orochimaru, the greatest threat to Konoha and now the Hokage seat is free for the taking. Danzou would never let a weapon such as the Nine Tails escape but still he might be able to twist the events in his favor. I wonder what will happen to Konoha with Naruto gone. I hope the freedom will be worth it! And maybe Naruto's friends will understand.
| Mimi chapter 2 . 1/25/2010
You need a beta. Like, badly. The parts are mostly obscure but once you swim past it and it's comprehensible it gets slightly better. But seriously.
Overall, I give you extreme kudos for creativity.
| Felixphoenix chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
The only thing that i have to tell you is that it could have been a great story if it wasn't a mess of jumbled and errand thoughts put together as a wannabe story.
Get some serious work done on the thing by clearing it out and organizing the plot and the sequence of the actions.
And for cryimh out loud get a f**king bets for the grammar vocabulary mistakes.
Maybe then it will resemble a story.
| r2d2cool chapter 9 . 1/25/2010
You are an amazing author. Please keep writing! This story was great and your summary of part 2 was amazing. I have no doubt that the sequal would have been amazing. Please for the love of goodness update or create a story soon. Ill be waiting!
See you around.
| Son of the morning chapter 9 . 1/25/2010
jesus. this story is the epitome of character development and creative plotting. at times it was a little hard to follow, but i assume thats because the main characters mind was in a constant state of turmoil. all in all, i fucking loved this story. can't wait for the next one. genius.
| Black King 201 chapter 9 . 1/24/2010
That was amazing. So are you going to write the sequel. Because while I'm sure it'll be good, you telling us what's going to happen kinda takes some of the fun out of it. Actually, I just went back and re-read your note, so never mind.
| 09725hsikqb chapter 9 . 1/24/2010
Oh my god... no words... wow.
| Lord Grond chapter 9 . 1/24/2010
Amazing last chapter, at the end of his reign as Hokage Naruto finally knew the truth of his existence and pain, after so much suffering at the hands of Konoha Naruto save them of the evilness of Orochimaru and later he leave them to enjoy his new found freedom, im impressed with the plot line of the sequel of this fic is really interesting and well planned im waiting to see the first chapter of the sequel, until then.
| dark kronus chapter 9 . 1/24/2010
loved this fic and glad you left a summary of what you would have done this is proberly the best naruto fic i have ever read and cant wait for the next naruto fic you do keep up the good work
| geetac chapter 9 . 1/24/2010
I like the chapter and the ending was sad.
| Han-Ko chapter 9 . 1/23/2010
Until now I didnt like endings, but you writed the most incredible ending I have seen in all my life.
You fic and spoiler were awesome.
Thanks for write this fic.
| Zaion Indulias chapter 9 . 1/23/2010
Well, ill read whatever you write, but I'll say this. especially with what is essentially a series bible, I really wish you would continue this story. overall idea behind it is one of the best i have ever seen for a naruto fic.
| crewger chan chapter 9 . 1/23/2010
I think that your summary spoilers is a fast paced story of your original story, if you get what I mean. Awesome man! Just wickedly awesome!
| anonymous chapter 9 . 1/23/2010
In one word, beautiful. Few stories reach this level.
By recognizing when to use, or when not to use, a "talking word," such as said, and, when one is used, which word specifically to use, an author pushes his or her story up a level of greatness. You have done this. Designing a brilliant plotline; translating jutsu into their japanese names; never discontinuing -without completing- a story; describing as many things as possible in as much detail as necessary; using correct spelling and grammar... these all increase that level. Stories that have all -or, even, almost all- of these attributes tend to -or, in my mind at least, should- be immortalized.
This is one of those stories.
However, even stories as incredible as this can recieve rage and hatred for all time if they do the wrong thing.
You have done this horrible, evil, thing.
You have completed your story...
WITH A CLIFFHANGER.
Normally, this would all be good and well, but you have stated that you do not intend to make a sequel.
In one word: BLASPHEMY!
This is the first review I have left after years of reading incredibly high quality fics on this site. I do this to beg, beg for what not only I, but, I am sure, everyone who will read this chapter will want: CLOSURE. A sequal, please, a sequal, I beg of you, a sequal!