Reviews for A Thin Veneer: Kirk Starkiller Dream State
pointlessjourney chapter 5 . 4/30/2017
I reread this again. By far the best part of ATV. Good job man.
ThanosofTitan chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
Dalek? No wonder they want to exterminate humans
chain.reader chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
Quite good!
Obi1Nemogbr chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
Fascinating story. I like these side stories. Looking forward to more.
Orumon chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
One word: Yikes.

Okay, more seriously, I'm not surprised that the Federation could be driven to do this sort of thing. It's the nature of man, but damn, the final chapter read like the stuff of nightmares. The fearsome thing is... it fits. Starfleet holds back pretty much throughout the entire plot of all three series, except against the borg.
justjoe chapter 5 . 2/22/2012
This was a very powerful story. The moral discussion between UFP and Klingons was well done. The choice made was very believable and proved how vicious someone can be when provoked. I feel that the outcome was spot on. After what happened to Earth, there was no way that Kirk was going to settle for anything less. They pissed off the wrong man and paid for it.

Great story.
bldude chapter 5 . 6/17/2011
Ha, the Vorlons got their asses handed to them. Interesting that the Federation would continue on to wipe out the Minbari...
ShadowCub chapter 5 . 6/11/2011
stark40763 chapter 5 . 10/25/2010
Well, The Vorlons reaped what they sowed...though at the Cost of The Federations Soul that is...that alternate reality will most likely become a dark place, with Genesis being kept in secret, to be used against the worst of The Feds enemies. The Borg, The Cardassians, The Dominion, etc. All because of The Vorlons Precious Circle...
JovianJeff chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
Well done! It was indeed one of the best cautionary tales I've read. Truly dark that I wanted to run and hide, yet the end made it all worth it. From Kirk's discoveries to what happened to his family, his dealing with his own hate the actual actions afterwards of such a war to truly make it horrific and something to be avoided if possible. The ending summed it up in such a simple way it was beautiful in execution. A hard lesson to get through but a well wrought one.
Qtelatino1 chapter 5 . 6/16/2009
I have just read all five chapters in this story and it was very good. You did a great job in bringing so many what if elements.
Deathbird Dark chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Very good story.

I apologize for my actions and the actions of the members of my group.

I eagerly await your next story update on ATV main.
Ed chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
A couple of things: First, I've tought about the Klingon and Romulon use of cloak in yours and other ST and B% cross-overs and I'm sure they would be that effective. Tachyon extensively in B5 universe. I would be reasonable to assume that some of their their sensors are tachyon based or prhaps cloaking would cause static in the their communications. Second when are you getting back to allies in blood? We've been left hanging for over a year now. Over all like the story, hated Bones getting killed but it is a fresh approach with the Federation showing its fangs when faced with destruction.
JC chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Great to known that A Thin Veneer will be over soon.

I hope you will go back to Another perspective soon,AlbertG.
ljbrown1 chapter 5 . 6/15/2009

Thats some good story writing...
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