|Reviews for The love scene that should have been|
| PeppahLouie chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
| FLOW LIZ chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Awesome. Definitely captured Edwards personality and wording if that makes sense. True gentlemen.
| KimCee1066 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
I loved this line: For a moment I could be just a man in love with a woman... No complications, no gaps between us. No differences.
You did a wonderful job capturing Edwards' "voice."
| Arianne loves Robert Pattinson chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
wow! this is great. awesome writing. thanks for doing and for sharing this.:))
| Frogie48 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
That was great! Nearly what I pictured for them too (only without the oral sex cause of Edward's worry of deviance)! Beautiful!
| lilibigsis chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
This was excellent
| paulineta chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
So absolutely beautiful... you almost made me cry...
I've read another FF about the honeymoon before, but nothing so full of love and adoration as this one...
| Rosalynn chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
see now that should have been in the book!
| Thata chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
What can I say this time?
JUST PERFECT... no way to describe...omce more, congrats! \o/
Hope to read something new from you soon!
Kisses from Brazil!
| bloodnoir chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Absolutely perfect and exactly how I envisioned that moment in Breaking Dawn! You write Edward and his so serious thoughts very well. Hope to read more from you.
| LibbyLou862 chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
ok, I have read this over 3 times, and I am NOT getting tired of it! A friend sent me both of your stories, and I have them in my favorites...WOW. You've done an amazing job capturing exactly how Edward thinks. This one is so sensual but not trashy. I appreciate your restraint in that aspect, even though the scene on the beach is pretty graphic, it's SO well-written. Bravo! The only thing I was wondering about was when Edward "felt her barrier give way". Maybe I'm wrong, but I thought if she had been using tampons it would've already been broken. In the book, Alice had packed her a box of tampons. Even with that little discrepency, I LOVE the way that scene was written. It is so positively sweet and definitely how I would've thought Edward would feel as he realized what was happening. Keep writing...I'll be looking for more from you!
| Lemon Verbena chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I loved it! Thanks for sharing.
| ninirific chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
This story was...just great. Like really, I think you did an AWESOME job at capturing everything that Edward is. Soo beautiful and poignant and...just wonderful. Great job on this and I totally think it could (and should) have made it into the book. Just what was missing and what we all needed.
Thanks for making it a reality of sorts for us all. You're great! ) XOXOX
| TizzyDizzy chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Really well written. ] I enjoyed it Immensely
| jenndenver chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
That was amazing...you write from Edward's POV so perfecly...keep going...write more!