Reviews for Return of the Best
shadowEagle235 chapter 20 . 2/15
Amazing, I really hope you continue the story :)
Bulbreon chapter 21 . 1/27
It's a shame that you stopped this story, it really had true potential.
Bulbreon chapter 20 . 1/27
Just saying, you said Dawn was 14 1/2, while Gary is 19, so wouldn't that kinda make him look like a pedo? Just saying, plot hole.
Bulbreon chapter 18 . 1/27
Gary has to win, he is the best.
Bulbreon chapter 13 . 1/27
You hit Morrison's character right on the spot lol
Bulbreon chapter 12 . 1/27
Cyndaquil did evolve lol, I think he did at the end of sinnoh, but anyway every story seems to have Charizards return, how come you couldn't do Pidgeot, or even Squirtle? It would've been better in my opinion.
Bulbreon chapter 10 . 1/26
well finally, lol
Bulbreon chapter 9 . 1/26
haha, drew's prissy ass is gunna get his ass whooooooooooooped
Bulbreon chapter 8 . 1/26
well now it's getting a bit interesting.
Bulbreon chapter 6 . 1/26
Drew's a little bitch. This chapter went really fast though, not much to say...
Bulbreon chapter 5 . 1/26
Well it has gotten better! Thanks you lord
Bulbreon chapter 4 . 1/26
Not saying that it's 'great' but it is getting a little better. I just hope on can say the sam ein the following chapters
Bulbreon chapter 1 . 1/26
well, this has potential, but moves way too fast and is slightly annoying to read. Anyway i'm still going to read the rest, I hope it gets better.
STNick999 chapter 14 . 1/22
then the light bulb burned out. "cr p."
Guest chapter 21 . 1/19
Upload more its been 4 years already
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