Reviews for Mar's Spiral
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 2 . 5/25/2017
First you never explained why Naruto has fox ears and tail and second Kubikiribocho can repair itself from the iron in peoples blood. Also why does Dorothy and Babbo not notice Naruto ears or tail?
za worlda chapter 11 . 8/17/2016
pano chaton chimera candice and loco
Guest chapter 6 . 6/10/2016
You are an anbu level ninja losing to a pathetic guy.
WordSmyth chapter 15 . 6/5/2015
This story would be 100% better without the random songs.
WordSmyth chapter 2 . 6/5/2015
Kubikiribōchō doesn't need to be reforged. If it is broken it can be repaired by soaking it in blood. It uses the iron from the blood to repair itself. And average ninja weapons are always going through stuff a lot tougher than stone and come out fine, so one of the mist's seven sacred blades would be able to go through stone like butter if enough force was applied.
Icewolf9879 chapter 17 . 7/23/2014
I like your mar's spiral story keep going dont stop
Alex2909 chapter 17 . 5/16/2014
please make it option 3
arctic9924 chapter 14 . 11/4/2013
*Looks outside, and sees said Teddy bears*GET BACK, BACK YOU CREATURES OF HEAVEN! AS A DEMON FROM HELL, I WILL DESTROY YOU! * Grabs 'special' sword* Ikorose, Shinsō!
Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo chapter 20 . 6/26/2013
Well I can't wait for you to start writing this story again.
Dymian chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
Little typo that i see all the time. 'Quite' instead of 'Quiet'.
kai chapter 14 . 5/7/2013
StrongGuy159 chapter 20 . 5/7/2013
Cool story continue please.
Darkus Cyril chapter 5 . 11/11/2012
LoL awesome, you got my fav DMC song, Devils Never Cry, in this chapter, badass :D
WTF chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Where are the new chapters, this is an awesome story and I demand to see more.
TheViewer chapter 12 . 10/29/2012
Great story update soon
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