Reviews for Ginny Returns
odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 2/8
I had a difficult time buying the part with Hermione's contribution to the ritual. After that, I really like the story.
perlcat45 chapter 17 . 1/28
Sweet story, loved it.
AliceTobor chapter 17 . 12/24/2023
There is a good story where Snape is a time traveler.
I cannot remember the title but he is told his soulmate is a Black squib.
Petunia is an earth or nature witch although she still cannot use a wand.
I think a god(dess) or reaper or some other power does the time reset.
It is over 100k, that I do remember.
AliceTobor chapter 11 . 12/23/2023
There are three times Voldemort can be killed before the final battle.

Year one when the part of his soul is in Quirrell.

Year four just after he comes out of the big cauldron.

Year five at the ministry when he wants the prophecy.

Most fanfiction does year four or five.

There is one that is a crossover with Ranma 1/2, POTTER THE STONE is the title if I remember correctly.
Tom is vanquished in year one.
AliceTobor chapter 10 . 12/23/2023
The greater part of the Wizarding World is full of lazy, easily led, unthinking, cowards who do not deserve life much less magic.

WIZARDS FALL is one of my very favorite fanfics.
AliceTobor chapter 9 . 12/23/2023
I would expect the canon Dumbledore to keep a close watch on Ginny while not taking her advice and ignoring anything Harry has to suffer.

All Wizards are arrogant and think they are smarter and wiser than they actually are.
This attitude comes partly from being able to change the world with a few magic words.
When they encounter a problem and find a solution, any solution, even if it is not the best idea, they stop thinking and enshrine it as tradition.

Albus Dumbledore has fallen into the sin of HUBRIS.

He thinks he is the smartest and wiser than everyone else.
That he doesn't share his knowledge and keeps people in the dark ensures this.

In short he acts like he is god, knowing best for others.

Hubris...
AliceTobor chapter 8 . 12/23/2023
How about a story where the Dursleys manage to murder Harry when he is very young?

Didn't Petunia hit Harry with a frying pan when he was four years old?

Harry Potter dies and a Ron Weasley gets his soul stuffed in Harry's child body.

The reason Ron takes Harry's place is up to you.

I suggest it be a Ron who gets caught and killed when he leaves Harry while they are hunting horcruxes.
AliceTobor chapter 7 . 12/23/2023
The way Hermione acts towards Lockhart is just one example of Rowling failing to write Hermione as the smartest witch.

It is a proven fact that it is impossible for a writer to portray a character that is smarter than the author is.

A person with average intelligence cannot write a genius character well.

JKR admitted she was bad at maths.
Bad at math means bad at logical thought and planning.
It explains why Hermione often acts much dumber than we expected.
AliceTobor chapter 5 . 12/23/2023
Supposedly Hogwarts is the BEST magical school in the world but the way Rowling wrote it we know it is NOT.

It seems Dumbledore wants to break the defense curse by hiring a teacher that lasts a full year, or maybe two.

Lazy and a typical Dumb ledorean approach where Albus himself does nothing and hopes for the best.

Someone wrote somewhere that Dumbledore isn't a person but a plot device.
If so it is one more thing Rowling got wrong, books and weapons are plot devices not characters.
By very definition devices are things not people.
AliceTobor chapter 4 . 12/23/2023
ROUNDABOUT DESTINY manages to redeem a number of death eaters.

FAERY HEROES is one of my favorite stories.
Death Eaters get fed death.
All of them.

When two evil men fight each other it doesn't make one of them a good man.
That Snape betrayed Tom doesn't make him good.

No good man would terrorize a child like Snape treats Harry.

Fawkes is a phoenix but does that make him light?
He is a bird of fire with "healing" tears certainly but a creature of light?
I think not.
Fire is said to purify so there is an explanation for healing tears.

I think Dumbledore started a RUMOR about phoenixes being creatures of light.

Dumbledore LIES quite often.

He had power to keep Snape out of Azkaban and make him a professor.
Therefore he had the power to get Sirius Black a trial.
AliceTobor chapter 3 . 12/23/2023
Rowling FAILED when she tried to make Snivelus a hero.

I also cannot believe Rowling saying Lily would choose Severus Snape.

JKR was a Single Mother when she wrote the first book.
A failure at love and relationships so her matchups in the series have a reason to be bad.

Love is the power he knows not?

Harry was raised in a house of HATE. He spent his formative years learning hate, not love.
Lust is instinctual, love must be learned. Harry has no clue.

Oh and Molly Weasley does not love, she smothers and controls while disrespecting others.
Why Sirius Black let Molly Weasley stay in HIS home without respecting him is a mystery.
AliceTobor chapter 3 . 12/23/2023
Another story I would love to see written is one where Ron gets jealous, Harry wishes Ron was the BOY WHO LIVED, and the wish is granted.

Ron must remember his previous life, his Jealousy.
Arthur, Molly, all his brothers and Ginny have to be dead, murdered.
Ginny can die unborn, as in Molly is pregnant with her when she dies...
Ron is given gifts by a grateful Wizarding World so has a Vault.
The value of everything should be over 40 thousand but under 50k galleons.
Close enough to rich.
He should be raised by his aunt, that Muriel Prewitt bitch
Ron will have table manners beaten/starved into him, other conduct as well.

The Potters and the Grangers will have fled Britain and no one has any idea where they are.

How well will Ron do as BWL? Will he like it? Learn? Will Wizarding Britain burn?

Thanks for writing.
AliceTobor chapter 2 . 12/23/2023
Rowling introduced the ICW in book one then never used it.

Why didn't the ICW help?

The rest of the magical world had to KNOW that Voldemort would not stop with Britain but was a danger to the world.

POTTERS STAND UNITED is on this site and has James and Lily live.

LILY LEAVES is also good if too short.
It is about 20k, definitely over 15 and under 25.
AliceTobor chapter 1 . 12/23/2023
Ginny

Rowling didn't write enough about her, and more than enough about Molly Weasley to make me name her Moralless Molly.

Almost all the Ginny hate is because of her mother.

I would like if you could write a story where Lily outsmarts both Albus Dumbledore and Voldemort.
Rowling wrote that Lily was the brightest witch of her generation but then had her act dumb.

Have Lily not only save Harry but herself and James.

Lily Evans is MUGGLEBORN, she should have encountered the idea of secret escape tunnels somewhere.
The idea of muggle explosives is known to her.
Put TONS of explosives in the walls and under the cottage.
BOOM! Tom is vaporized and Peter Pettigrew is collateral damage, dead by shrapnel.

If you want to get sneaky, have decoys that look like the Potters in the cottage.

Anyway the Potters live and Harry gets the childhood Rowling seemed to enjoy denying him.

She should have had them flee Britain and have Harry Potter return at the head of an army that could FIX the corrupt British Wizarding World.

A true epic but instead what she wrote was a tale of tragedy and horror.

Albus Dumbledore decided where Harry lived, who would be his first friend, what he would learn, how he would be treated as a child, his "death", and who his wife would be.

Molly Weasley worshipped Dumbledore, so did Ginny to an extent.
As his wife Ginny Weasley would be another way to control Harry.

One of the few things Rowling did right was killing Dumbledore.

You could even have a Reaper challenge where Lily is sent back.

On AO3 there is a fic where the three Potters, Frank and Alice and Neville Longbottom leave Britain.
The Grangers have left as well.
All the families meet in California.

I think the title is SOMETHING WASN'T RIGHT SO WE LEFT.
ressmania chapter 17 . 12/20/2023
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