You spelled Mcgonagall's name wrong. I spelled it right over there. But you did spell her
first name right!

Slytherin doesn't have a tower. Only Ravenclaw and Gryffindor do.

By Merlins beard, did you even read the books? I would say you're an analphabet, but you just seem to be uninformed. LegilEmens? Okay, hat one was a mistake. McGonigal? What the literal fuck?

Sooo. Breathing. But I'll read on, because the rest of the fanfic is great. I love the beginning. And I'm sure there was someone before me who raged at Gonigal, so maybe you make it better after chapter 2 ;D Maybe that's the reason I got so upset, hate it to find good fanfiction and after a while they just got worse. :) sorry

So, and now i apologize for my crappy English, I'm from Germany and i suck at writing English in correct grammar (German fanfics suck, most of them).

you are the best writer in the world you writed this book like it was yoursand you did awsome at job.

write better than j.k rollowing

Awww. Very sweet story. I love it. Great job!

it's really good and even tho the ending could be called rushed i absoulutly loved it! there was something about the epilogue that was blunt and got to the point but in a totally awesome way. but let e just say that i think rose and scorpius are complete nincompoops for not getting with the program for YEARS! how thick can you get? O.O

guess what! I'm reviewing all of your chapters all over again...BECAUSE I CAN!

wowwy harry potter! (AVPM)

i was reading through your comments and found: This story is absolute rubbish. I mean you have poor grammar, you have a :P in your TITLE and you have various capitalization errors in your summary. Your laziness is utterly ridiculous. My advice. Get better or DO NOT WRITE, you are plaguing our society with your ineptitude.

i read it in a british accent

very good

i literally loled when i read about albus opening the chamber of secrets and using it for quarters, that was really funny haha

well done you finished it!

:D

aw its all done :( i liked this one alot

You made me laugh..alot.. i like this fanfic! :)

lol this chapter was funny! Muffy McMuffin? LOL

great story so far. I love the chemistry you got going there between Rose and Scor. and as for Cedric, I'm a bit surprised with that one. Asian? I always saw Cho as more into British guys, being raised outside of Asia. Or is he the really cute kinda halfer that looks mostly Asian but is slight different, ie perhaps a tad paler. Ok, maybe this is just me, an Asian chick who's a major sucker for halfers and locals.

Scor, Al, and Rose are like the Golden Trio of the next gen, landing themselves in the hospital wing all the time. I like it that you portrayed Draco as evil in this. So Astoria is sickly because she was bitten by a poisonous plant? Interesting. I like that twist alot, too.

Sorry, me again... just one thing: the characters do act a little older than their eleven years... perhaps it would've been better basing their story in third year etc.

But overall, good job! :) x

sweet ending :) though I wish they'd got together sooner! :/

Really nice writing style, and since it's finished, I can't beg for another update... oh well ;)

xx

great story! please write moreç