|Reviews for Setting Sun|
| RedConnect chapter 20 . 11/5/2015
Omfg that was fcking Hilarious!
It would've been cool for Bella to like take control of the voice and rip them limb from limb but somehow Alice died or something... Idk but the last part was freaking hysterical
| TeganCappa chapter 9 . 7/16/2015
The story was going so well until this chapter. It's all down hill from here until the end.
| TeganCappa chapter 20 . 6/26/2015
| milagglad chapter 20 . 8/28/2014
| I. W. Cullen chapter 20 . 2/2/2014
LOL that was hilarious! Awesome!
| RainBlueWater chapter 20 . 11/30/2011
10 out of 10
| Alina bee chapter 9 . 2/20/2011
errrrr...i thought vamps were plood less
| Critic chapter 7 . 1/24/2011
In the first kiss u do know Bella shouldn't have to tip toe because she's taller than Alice
also u should mention Alice thinking after she thought about touching bella's new skin that's she glad Edwards so focused on Bella that he can't hear her thoughts
| janjan2009 chapter 20 . 1/24/2011
U are evil! :( whens the sequel comin?
| janjan2009 chapter 11 . 1/23/2011
wow and the plot thickens!
| janjan2009 chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
Love the story so far!
| Deanne Marie Cullen chapter 20 . 12/28/2010
I was giving you the benifit of the doubt when I started reading this and it was going in a direction that I really didn't like. I was going to comment at that time but I decided to wait and read the whole thing through. Much to my dismay this is the first time that I read a story on here that I didn't like. I am sorry to say this. It reminded me of the show "Dallas" and the "who shot J.R." plot. I didn't like that one either. I know to each their own. And I am sure that there are people who like this. When you had it listed ast Drama/Romance that is what I thought it was. Maybe if it was under a different catagory I would have undertood the plot better. Maybe I like more "fluff" lol. Anyway your writing in itself it very good! I would love to try to read more of your work if I understand the plot a little better. Sorry if this comes across a little to harsh.
| fadewind chapter 6 . 11/1/2010
Love this line:
"I'll be sweeter than sugar and nicer than Christmas!"
Where did you get it from? I think I might adopt the saying.
| berylbutterfly chapter 20 . 10/24/2010
That was a truly evil story with an equally evil ending...intriging as hell though :D very well done. I am mildly affaid of you and your mind ;P
| Twilightvamp0 chapter 20 . 9/11/2010
please tell me you are going to contiue this. how do they handle the vision? what happens?