|Reviews for Coming of Age|
| Kittens Kat chapter 26 . 1/8
I LOVE THIS STORY! THANK YOU!
| The Moon and Shooting Stars chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
um, I like this story but I'm a little confused, it says that Charlie was mated to Lavender who was Fleur's sister, and then later it says that Lavender is sisters with Luna and Hermione. Is there two Lavenders? and can I just say that Harry/Fenrir is one of my favorite pairings? So thank you for posting!
| sleepyalicedreams chapter 26 . 8/24/2013
I like it
| Hijiri-san chapter 26 . 8/12/2013
I like this story! It's always a bit strange to think about the ages of both of them - In real life, we don't see this difference of age often but in stories like yours that doesn't matter because the story makes sense and it's interesting! Thank you very much!
| Anon chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
Just a note based on your timeline Fenrir would have been 7 max when he took over the pack. I don't know if that's what you meant when you said he was young but I just thought I'd point it out.
| demona voulturi chapter 26 . 6/18/2013
thank you for a great read i hope you can make branch offs about the others. 3 you
| Sabrina98 chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
I really like your story! Thanks for putting this up here, I've been looking for a good Fenrir/Harry for ages. You got the spelling wrong though. Here, it's not rouge, it's rogue. Rouge is a type of make up from the medieval ages or something I think. I don't know though, maybe the spelling is different where you are, America or somewhere.
| KatelinSalLovesReading1 chapter 26 . 4/13/2013
| not dead yet chapter 26 . 3/26/2013
super cute ending!
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/23/2013
Haha i love how harry is just so casually like Oh by the way im having quadtruplets. We might need some new rooms. XD
Im gonna look for the sequel now!
| Team Major Whitlock chapter 26 . 2/24/2013
i loved it, this story was simply amazing x
| NOMBS chapter 26 . 2/22/2013
an exelent story with great lemony sceens and ecselent writing i love ya man and i love ya storys too
| Talizora chapter 26 . 1/16/2013
Haha, I liked the ending. Really funny. Your story could really use a re-write, there are a lot of spelling errors and typos, but it not the worst I've seen. Good work, I love Fenrir/Harry stories!
| XamierTheNobody chapter 6 . 1/16/2013
Why did you make Harry so weak? Earlier when 'Ethan' just asked him a fucking question he freaked out and went crying home to mommy and daddy. He's sixteen! He should at least have a backbone and not cry when a leaf brushes his damn shoulder. And I thought you said they lived in the forest? How do they have furniture and a TV? Where's the cable coming from? This story had so much potential but the mixture of poor grammar and the fact that Harry is basically a twelve year old girl just makes this story extremely unappealing. Just because he's 'submissive' doesn't mean that he has to cry and be weak towards everything. Also, how are Luna and Hermione twins? They look nothing alike! And you have two characters named 'Lavender'. I'm critiquing this so that you can improve because honestly this story needs a bit of help.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
wait if fenrir is 23, and he took in the potters before harry was born and harry is almost 16, wouldn't that mean fenrir took them in when he was 7.