Reviews for Glass Eyes
rockerbabe1429 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
I loved it. So very much. It was amazing; the language, the vividness... true beauty, and extremely inspirational. Great work.
Mantinas chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Great story!
Mute Muse chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I love this story! your writing is so poetic and I think perfectly describes the odd (and terrifying) relationship between Walter and Henry. I wish this had been one of the endings... hope to read more of your story's in the future!
Receiver of Wisdom chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Wow. This story actually made me shudder a little bit. It was very creepy, which I can only assume is what you were going for.

I really like how you wrote this. The subtle feeling of anxiety as it grew more and more, until finally leading up until the kiss which, unlike most kisses, almost seemed more horrifying than anything, really gave this story a dark feel to it.

I also really like how you wrote what Henry was feeling.

All around great job. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
demonlifehealer chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Hmm...morbid yet with a fine lemon twist of erotic mixd in. Great! Lovely story and I can't wait to see the other stories you'll write in the future! Good work!