|Reviews for Along the Way|
| little miss saigon chapter 1 . 10/2
SASUGAYYYY Y U STAB HINA-BAE :u okayokayokay i loveloveLAHVVEEEE the stylistic prose of this fic. LAHVEEE
| StreetlightsAndCityscapes chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
This was so cute! I love how Hinata makes the first move :)
| TangoLimaCharlie chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
See thats how it should be! Hinata making the initiative for the first kiss! The girl has every right too.
| NoeticSky chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
well done! kept it IC and still developed their characters well (most fanfic writers tend to portray hinata as a stuttering, bumbling fangirl when she's much more layered than that)
tenten! she's so cute here!
and NH is pretty much canon now, chapter 615 onwards pretty much cemented it
| ranneal chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I love the way you go through the times that Naruto and Hinata have had an impact on each others lives. I think back to the first anime episode I saw...and remember how Hinata looked at Naruto. Great fanfic.
It looks like they are together now since manga ch#615...now we have to wait on Kishi to take it a step further.
| Kwala chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Wow. This story was great! I love stories that make Hinata a complex human rather than a stuttering fangirl. The end with Hinata being so tired, hurt and relived that she forgets that Naruto may not feel the same NEEDS to happen! I was so touched by that, cause it does not get any more honest than that!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
:D :D :D
That was amazinggg :D sorry if it's been a really long time, but I just needed to say how awesome I think this is. It gives me that ~~squeee~ feeling. Love this part:
"and when he shouts, he makes it echo, because that's the only way anyone will hear him"
best line ever. :D
| The Truthful Liar chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
It's kind of ironic that Hinata made the first move. Who's laughing at the end, though? Tenten, maybe?
| Ceri Moriarty chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
eee, so cute! NaruHina is my second-favorite pairing-involving-the-character-Naruto, just because it's so CUTE. eeeeeeeeeeeee…
| Swimgirl28 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
| Rayneken chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
You really pulled this off! I loved the format and the descriptions of both of them. Silk and solidified sunshine, very nice. Your numbers tapered off somewhere in the middle, and I wasn't sure if it was intentional or not.
Either way, it worked.
Thanks for the great story!
| Ginriku chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Once again I bow down O mistress _ Needless to say when I found this floating in my inbox from months earlier i nearly hit my self for not reading it sooner lol. You are truely the master of one-shots _
| imatwilightfan chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
i believe that there are a lot of errors on this fic so you might want to read through this again..but i can still say its a nice enough story..
| WhatAWildThing chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
I love this story(: You are an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G writer. I do have a question though, who is laughing at the end? I can't figure it out.
| immortaltwinsuns chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
I love it, it is so beautiful. But the parts that aren't in brakets sometimes begin with numbers and sometimes start mid-sentance. That confused me, is it supposed to be like that?