Reviews for Parallels
The Two-One-Five chapter 4 . 8/23/2010
Not sure if this story will be left unfinished or not—I’m hoping it’s not, as few stories on here catch my interest—but I do hope it eventually gets finished. However, if there is one thing that I would criticize in this chapter is the exposition/”show don’t tell” in the part where you were describing their majors/jobs. Unless they play an important role later on—and I’m guessing Jyou’s and Koushiro’s probably might—then it is just an unnecessary detail that kind of hurts the flow of the story. It doesn’t really hurt the story; I just felt that it was an unneeded aspect. Still, this is one of the more enjoyable unfinished stories on here and it’s ashamed it’s left unfinished.
Jack Skeletor chapter 4 . 3/19/2009
I like this. :)
goggleboy020303 chapter 2 . 3/19/2009
anna chapter 3 . 3/19/2009
keep writing...
Amber chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Nice description! Can’t wait for the rest of it!
Lord Pata chapter 4 . 3/19/2009
wow! poor Kari that sure was intense, poor Cody too, I loved the final of this chapter, Gatomon so motherly kissing Kari's forehead, Kari listening to Gatomon's heartbeat, it was so beautiful

I so love Gatomon, she and Patamon have something that always makes me smile whenever I read parts with them in the fics about their bond with their partners, the bond between them and with their friends too

Both sure got those angel evolutions well deserved
cloud chapter 2 . 3/19/2009
i like this story a lot! continue!
Marymaruka chapter 3 . 3/19/2009
Good story. write more soon, ok? when will kari show off her power?
Lord Pata chapter 2 . 1/17/2009
Wow pretty intense chapter, poor Gatomon cut in half at least she is back in one piece

and Yolei had to open her mouth with that of future Mrs. Wizardmon, guess she forgot how much that affects Gatomon :(

Is good that Gatomon has so much support from the others or else she wouldn't have been able to move on
dracula-key chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
i lkie it, i really like it. keep it up.
Lord Pata chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
hey long time no see you on the writing, this fic is the same you started a while ago? Digimon 02: Parallels? I mean both have the same name

Good to see you writing still oh and Merry Christmas