|Reviews for An Organ of Fire|
| Centra-gal86 chapter 25 . 4/22/2005
Okay...maybe it's because I'm running on empty here and will be directly going to bed after finishing this review...but I'm actually this close to crying.
That was such a beautiful story. I've read loads where Ron's been knocked off, but this one really hit home. My heart still hurts just thinking about it. I don't know what I'll do if JKR does it for real, but, all the same...
I really must compliment you on how you continued to incorporate Ron throughout the story-especially the parts about him being good to Harry Jr and being their when Harry and co killed Malfoy/Voldemort. And while I am perfectly aware that Ron is more of a back story this, I am inclined to believe that his story is what has touched me most deeply. You're truly gifted. Thank you!
| xHarlequin Girlx chapter 25 . 4/10/2005
Ok...first things first..."THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!" (in quote of tricycle dude from the incredibles...) I laughed, I got mad, and I bawled my eyes out...you really have quite the technique there...stick with it! You made my cry in this one when I didn't even cry when Sirius died...and he was my fav. charrie...Thank you I've now realised Ron can't die...for the sake of my sanity...lol
| petalpink chapter 25 . 3/30/2005
-cries- I love this story, I want a sequel! But it's perfect as it is.
| Batman vs Potter chapter 25 . 3/16/2005
I think I might cry... kidding... great story!
| Audny chapter 3 . 3/10/2005
I love this story and I've only just started it. Excellent.
| Pasht chapter 25 . 3/6/2005
Wow. That was awesome! Very well written. I liked it more than a lot of Harry Potter romance fanfics I've read because you weren't afraid to kill off well-loved or important characters. You made tragedy an important part of the story, which can only help make your story better. A lot of authors shy away from killing characters off, but you didn't. And as such the main characters were able to develop. One thing you might want to consider if you ever rewrite/revamp/edit this story is that Hermione's initial acceptance of Harry is very sudden. She just suddenly invites him to dinner. What made her change her mind so quickly? (However, if you do alter this, make sure you don't extend it on forever. While getting them together quickly is a good way to keep the audience, having Hermione just accept Harry back out of teh blue when she was supposedly resisting is a tad confusing.)
Other than that, wonderful story. I think I'll go have a look at what else you've written. Chiao!
| Minderella chapter 2 . 2/13/2005
Oh MY god. I love you.
| Retasu chapter 3 . 2/8/2005
Harry is so aggresive in this fic! I can't help but wonder what reasons made him leave Hermione. Excellent!
| Retasu chapter 2 . 2/8/2005
You. Are. So. Freakin. Cool.
There, I have no other way of saying it. There isn't an ounce of displeasure in me while I read this. So cool. So wow.
Vo-cab-u-lary - not-big - e-nough - to - ex-plain - great-en-joy-ment
| Calen chapter 2 . 2/5/2005
What a bitch! So did she marry Ron before or after he left. Cause it if was before, then she really deserves a kicking.
| King Dimension chapter 25 . 1/16/2005
| Nichalia chapter 11 . 1/8/2005
| bill560682 chapter 20 . 1/6/2005
a flesh eating virus would be nice very slow very painfull the slower and more painful the better or maybe skin him alive start at the toes and work your way up and do not allow him the plearuse of fainting or you could literaily break every bone in his body an you could also take a torch an burn the skin right off his body starting at the toes and working your way up
| bill560682 chapter 12 . 1/5/2005
so far i have little problem with your story but the chapter titles do not seem to have much to do with the chapter that an if i were ron i would have sent at least two dozen howlers to harry so there would be no way he could not know about his child but i know that would not fit the story line
| bill560682 chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
don't worry i am 35 years old an i like harry potter