Reviews for An Organ of Fire
Audny chapter 3 . 3/10/2005
I love this story and I've only just started it. Excellent.
Pasht chapter 25 . 3/6/2005
Wow. That was awesome! Very well written. I liked it more than a lot of Harry Potter romance fanfics I've read because you weren't afraid to kill off well-loved or important characters. You made tragedy an important part of the story, which can only help make your story better. A lot of authors shy away from killing characters off, but you didn't. And as such the main characters were able to develop. One thing you might want to consider if you ever rewrite/revamp/edit this story is that Hermione's initial acceptance of Harry is very sudden. She just suddenly invites him to dinner. What made her change her mind so quickly? (However, if you do alter this, make sure you don't extend it on forever. While getting them together quickly is a good way to keep the audience, having Hermione just accept Harry back out of teh blue when she was supposedly resisting is a tad confusing.)

Other than that, wonderful story. I think I'll go have a look at what else you've written. Chiao!
Minderella chapter 2 . 2/13/2005
Oh MY god. I love you.
Retasu chapter 3 . 2/8/2005
Harry is so aggresive in this fic! I can't help but wonder what reasons made him leave Hermione. Excellent!
Retasu chapter 2 . 2/8/2005
You. Are. So. Freakin. Cool.

There, I have no other way of saying it. There isn't an ounce of displeasure in me while I read this. So cool. So wow.

Vo-cab-u-lary - not-big - e-nough - to - ex-plain - great-en-joy-ment

;-)
Calen chapter 2 . 2/5/2005
What a bitch! So did she marry Ron before or after he left. Cause it if was before, then she really deserves a kicking.
King Dimension chapter 25 . 1/16/2005
Great story!
Nichalia chapter 11 . 1/8/2005
wo!
bill560682 chapter 20 . 1/6/2005
a flesh eating virus would be nice very slow very painfull the slower and more painful the better or maybe skin him alive start at the toes and work your way up and do not allow him the plearuse of fainting or you could literaily break every bone in his body an you could also take a torch an burn the skin right off his body starting at the toes and working your way up
bill560682 chapter 12 . 1/5/2005
so far i have little problem with your story but the chapter titles do not seem to have much to do with the chapter that an if i were ron i would have sent at least two dozen howlers to harry so there would be no way he could not know about his child but i know that would not fit the story line
bill560682 chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
don't worry i am 35 years old an i like harry potter
Barefoot Bohemian chapter 25 . 12/26/2004
Wow, I am so amazed by this story. If you can get so into character... why are you posting on a fan fiction site? Your writing skills are way beyond anything here, this story really took me on an emotional rollercoaster (as retarded as that sounded, considering this is just ). I'm deeply impressed. I don't mean to gush but really. Perfect ending. I'd be estatic to read anything else you've written.

with all due respect,

Ebony River
chantal-j.t chapter 25 . 12/20/2004
hey that was awsome! i LOVE this story! Can't wait to read your other stories!
whatshername chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Hi! I just re-found this story after like half a year and had to leave a review because I don't think I did when I read it _

This was the first fic I ever read and I found it by accident. Since then I've read pretty much everything and thought I'd come and thank you for getting me hooked (I'm getting much better marks for English Lit.)

Anyways I love this story, if I remeber correctly, I'm quite sure that it made me laugh and cry! Not something that happens too much, I don't think. So thanks again,

x whatshername x
savie chapter 8 . 12/16/2004
Oh, my dear Lord. You are amazing i mean i'm addicted to your stories. I didnt know you were that good until i read A Dance Under A Diamond Sky. I thought you were out of your mind making them all balerinas but i had read your series A Family life or something like that and it was great so i said what the heck. By the way i have been checking that story for 3yrs and you havn't finished it what the fuck i wanna know what happens. (pout) But damb i come out of my school computer lab looking like a total dork cause i have pilles of printed paper carrying you stories. I mean how old are you and why are so good. i tried to write a story but their is no comparison i go to sites looking for your name i read like all of your stories 3 times. I think you should publesh them so i can buy them and not have to cary a pile of papers everywhere. Just dont ever stop writing cause i'd die.

P.S i would really like your oppinion on my GW fic.

Savie
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