|Reviews for Flirting on the Runway|
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/26/2016
I got confused in the last few chapters. First Bell was having obe baby. Then You mentioned three babies and then twins. Also, I think you went a little too fast but it was a good story. I enjoyed it a lot.
| sherilynn chapter 24 . 7/8/2015
I would be very pissed off if my friends could not do as i wish. If she didnt want to go, then edward should have gotten very mad at jasper when he man handled her. Not a very good friend in my book.
| anafinchel chapter 30 . 2/18/2015
this was so beautiful! LOVED IT!
| anafinchel chapter 14 . 2/17/2015
hahahaha, I laughed at the end...i could just picture it happening! XD hehehe
| Robstenlovefan chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Love this story!
| LadySixx chapter 31 . 7/25/2013
What a fantastic story, loved it!
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/20/2013
I love this chapter... When i was reaing the description of Bella's dress I was thinking more along the lines of Christina A. dress in Burlesque when she was singing Bound To You, but the dress you chose was pretty as well.!
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/8/2013
FOOK! NO SEQUEL! PLEASE!
AT LEAST NOT UNTIL YOU LEARN HOW TO PUNCTUATE PROPERLY!
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/8/2013
MAYBE A LESSON IN PROPER USE OF PUNCTUATION WITHIN THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE WOULDN'T GO AMISS EITHER, EH?
| Guest chapter 21 . 5/8/2013
CHOOSE ONE FORMAT FOR YOUR CHAPTERS AND STICK TO IT! IF YOU CHOOSE TO LABEL YOU CHAPTERS (I.E: CHAPTER ONE, CHAPTER TWO, ETC...) BE CONSISTENT AND KEEP THAT FORMAT THROUGHOUT THE DAMN STORY!
WORD OF ADVICE - LABEL THE FRIGGEN CHAPTERS/POV'S!
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/8/2013
STOP PUTTING LITTLE NOTES IN THE STORY! IT INTERRUPTS THE FLOW...
SORT IT OUT, LOVE!
| janelle.singleton2 chapter 30 . 3/21/2013
Please write a sequel because that was a amazing story that you did.. If all story's ended like that :D
| janelle.singleton2 chapter 25 . 3/20/2013
Did not see that one coming but ma keys it a good story:)
| Awesomesaurs chapter 31 . 11/23/2012
That was a really good story. I enjoyed it a lot
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I'm trying to decide how far I can suspend disbelief. A 4'11 runway model? Never gonna happen. Ever. A model eating a bagel? Not unless she's bulimic. Three bestest friends finding the three bested guys on the very same night? Fairy tale.