Wow. That was excellent. So excellent I'm up till 1:30 am finishing it, when I have to be at work bright and early. lol

You truly have talent. Your author's notes mention doing some form of writing for a living so perhaps it's silly of me to say, but you're very good. I hope what yo do for a living is fiction writing and please point me the directions of it if it is. You really know how to capture your characters. It's simple and direct, without all the added frills that is often seen in fiction, but it truly gets to the heart of what the characters are thinking and feeling. It's lovely. I'm looking forward to starting the sequel and seeing what else you've written.

Greeting, I have to say that I was a little apprehensive of the premise, but i think that you did a lovely job with this story. I liked the alternating POV's and I applaud you for even trying. It is hard enough to writer two different view points, much less 6. You did a great job and i think that you captured their voices very well. I especially enjoyed your interpretation of Angela. She is an interesting and underused character in the show (IMHO). So thank you for the lovely story and the few hours of entertainment. Please keep up the great work, and i look forward to reading more of your stories.

I really loved that! It isn't just your typical B/B stuff.

It was really funny and really good.

Thank you so much for writing it!

Okay, finally finished it.

I love it and I more importantly love that youre writing a sequel - which i'll jujmp right over and read now!

again, your characterizations were spot on and I love that you ignore the horrible Roxy dealio - it kills me when I see her and ange together - angela belongs with Hodgins and that's final in my book.

I love how you sometimes mentiones Zack, I'm so sad and devastated over the storyline with him, and I know it's craxy, but I just hope he'll get out and rejoin the team and live in the garage as always...sigh...

Moving on, love the way you write and as mentioned earlier, I'm moving up to the new story! Definitely a topwriter in my book!

Happy writing

ditte mai

denmark

Favorite chapter so far - I adored the ending! You write everyone so mmindblowingly good! I hope to read alot moer of your stuff!

Happy writing

ditte mai

denmark

I thoroughly enjoyed this - Now I'm off to check out the sequel!

I really enjoyed the Cam chapter. I think you nailed her voice, and made her a lot more sympathetic as well. I particularly liked her observation about how Zack was "hers."

Wow! That was SUCH an original storyline, and I fell in love with the concept. You tackled it so well: everyone was always in character (which is hard, especially when they all pair off like that) and your plotline developed and resolved wonderfully. All the loose ends just totally drew together. I enjoyed seeing it from different POVs as well.

Everything was great! I'm really looky forward to reading the sequel. Keep writing!

MM

I love this story!

i started reading this story when it was already finished so i decided to wait until the end before i reviewed but i loved it! the only flaw was that zack wasn't there but nobody can change the gormagon thing so you were just sticking to the story line

Heidi

HI. I enjoyed your story very much, the best thing about is that is is realistic, not many of the stories here are. The dialog and the things in between...I could easily see and hear the characters in that.

Thank you, I look forward to reading the sequel.

okay.

so.

where to begin.

this was - by far, by extremely far - the best bones fanfic, possibly the best fanfic in general, i have ever read. it was SO in character i felt like i was reading an actual script, and so funny it had me grinning from the first paragraph. you not only have bones and booth down, you have ALL of the other characters perfectly, not one part was ever OOC.

so THANK YOU for being so totally awesome.

also, i was up till one am last night reading this and i was a complete zombie in class today (i had to give a presentation) so that is your fault. but since i noticed there is a sequel to this story, you are forgiven. keep it up!

- solomynne.

Wonderful characterisation and a directed, focused plot that was exceedingly well structured.

I found this a joy to read from beginning to end and hope that you continue to write more Bones fanfiction. Should you decide to write other things in future, I suspect I will be very happy to look at those as well!

i have abandoned trying to even look as if i were doing anything resembling homework in favor of this story. it turns me to girly-girl mush and an obsessive reader all at once. it's rare i find a story that simulatniously enthralls me and turns my heart to goo - you've got me hooked.

i have to say, i had my doubts in the begining of the story... but then you really seemed to hit your stride, nairling all of the characters perfectly. you got their mentality, dialog and physical actions down pat. and i loved the swearing you added in for spice, i've always thought the show needed more.

you've written a story so amazing i'm almost convinced to get on board with outward bound... then i realize they don't guarentee mind-blowing sex or anything close to Booth - jsut dirt, sweat, and crazy-ass wildnerness fanatics. but i may just have to drag my lazy ass to the ocean this weekend and breathe in the yumilicious salt air. maybe i'll even pull and angela and grab myself a delicious booth-hodgins swirl of a guy. what can i say - you've inspired me.

can't wait to stay up way too late reading the sequel!

pixie

Very very very cool story. I loved Booth and Bones snuggling and the end scene at the bar when Booth had to suppress his anger at Jeremy. I couldn't stop laughing through the groups antics while they were in the woods.

Wow, poor Jack... I was actually tearing up for him at the end there.