Amazing Story - Love the story idea! Love how you write the character! Love everything about this story! :D

You're picking good issues for each character to grapple with. Each voice is distict and consistently in character throughout the day. I look forward to Booth's thoughts next. Thanks for writing.

I like Cam's voice; she comes through well. I didn't realize different characters would narrate. I think the shifting POV is fun and adds depth.

I'm curious to see where this will go. :) The premise is far-fetched but could deliver a lot of laughs. I feel like the characters and dialogue crystallize closer to the end, when they actually arrive at Outward Bound.

Thanks for writing!

I really love your story..the length of your chapters in all your stories are fine to me. I love your writing and you are so far IMO always right in character...

Another excellent chapter!

Excellent CAM pov...not many get it right...you did wonderfully! Funny again!

I know I'm a late comer to this story but it is so funny...I was laughing..the comedic tone is refreshing! I love the idea of this story and can't wait to read on!

This is DAMN GOOD. I'm only in season 6 right now but this flows off the original canonical story line so well it's no trouble to reconcile the two. I can't get over how real the world is. Often you get this slightly hazy reality but in yours they get grubby, and upset and confused. They go to the toilet (which is disconcertingly rare in fan fiction) and have the occasionally wank (hilarious and even rarer). You have a loyal follower now, will read the sequels in due course.

WOW! I love this story waaaayyyyyy too much. You're such a good writer. I'm a fan! I'll definitely read your sequel but it's 3AM in my place and I gotta work later. Thank you!

love it!:)

oh...so nice!:)

really like the different points of view!

Only just discovered this story and I love it love it love it. So much insight into the characters. And not just one, but all of them. Loved Hodgins' day the best.

Thanks for providing me with an amazing read.

I really enjoyed what I'v read so far. Everyone's in character, and Booth's speech pattern is very precise. It's beautifully written, however sometimes hard to follow who is speaking. Other than that, I love the idea and can't wait to read the rest! (:

-Lily