|Reviews for Look Not Unto the Past|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
That is soo sweet.
| Shadowmaiden3 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I'm not one to write long reviews, but in your case I just can't think of the right words to express it.
Horo was very well done, she didn't dwell on anything, just brushed it off with a typically sharp observation. Good job on Lawrence too, being the worrywart that he is.
I enjoyed this a lot.
| Makuhari-Fan01 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
While it seems Lawrence accepts Horo's point, perhaps she will grace him with a few tales of what she's seen, as they wait out the storm.
| Kagennotsuki chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
I think Lawrence was uncharacteristically excited in this story. It wasn't too out-of-character, but it felt a little odd. That said, I enjoyed your story; there were few (and minor) grammar hiccups, the quality and the style of writing were both good, and the story flows smoothly. Nicely done :)
| Fanityfan chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
A very nice story. A short look in the life of the trader pair.
It feels a bit incomplete though, there's no definite conclusion,
only a vague sense of Lawrence's introspective mood and Horo's
animal like wisdom.
You could flesh the ending out a bit more, show us Lawrence's
Nevertheless, I like it a lot. The quality of writing and
characterisation is very good.