Reviews for Close Enough
stephvanie chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
I like seme Neku the best. *w*
HellsingDog chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Sooo cute! Josh is speechless for the first time! Not even a "Mmmm...I'm in paradise!"
Luna Rockey chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Hell yes! About time Neku took charge in this piece of epicness!
Oh my god yes chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
'kay, I am speechless. Although I'll have to admit, who wouldn't get a chick boner from reading this? Seriously?

That was one of the best things I've read, and mainly for the fact the characters had switched dominance roles.

Personally I believe Josh is the one who's appearance seems to scream 'uke', although his personality is quite coy. Making him all vulnerable and caught off guard was very interesting to read... Emphasis on the 'very'.

And I died. Neku as the seme - my life has been made. And you brought out my inner fangirl. Thanks a lot.

I actually had to stop reading at certain parts just to mull over what I read, and made sure that my head ain't screwing with me. He does bring sexy back - WAY better than Justin Timberlake, and I'm impressed! Oh, nice touch on the piercing. Suprisingly suitable towards his character not only in your fic, but in game too! And it's also sexy. Was never a fan of piercings but now... Fwooh Hey, is it hot in here, or just me?

LOL, anyways. You know your stuff, so please keep writing! Well done for pulling this off very well! :D
HaPpY bAcKwArDs chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Neku - seme - hot.

X3
once-upon-a-dream012 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
:o omigah! This was juuuuuuust amazing Virtual huggies!
bakaja chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
hahaha i love how th roles a switched around
redleaveshavefallen chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
...AWE-SOME. As in, I am in awe, and that was SOME fanfic. ;p I loved it, it was tasteful and...*smirks evilly* tasteful. That seems naughty now. XD I loved it. That also seems bad in this situation.
Finnegan G. Drake chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Refreshing different from most JxN fanfics. And it's well within artistic interpretation to guess that Neku might have a tongue stud. That was a nice touch. Go MMZ!
Rythica chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
I think I just melted. Melted into a little puddle of fangirl love-mush. That was incredible. I love this pairing because the dominance could go either way, and was totally physced that you made Neku top.

Zetta amazing.3
NekuThat1DeadKid chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
WTF! You pulled it off!

I looked at this fan fiction among the others and I though

"aww man no way I'm reading that there's no way Neku could possibly be seme" but hen i was curious and I think you pulled it of rather well, little out of character, but that's to be expected with fics like this
totallycraz4anime chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
I prefer Joshua on top, but after this story, I suppose that Neku being control is good too :3
kenco-coffee chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
o.o wow!

I have always wondered what a seme-Neku would be like

ZOMG! You've totally made my day :D

The story was well-written too!

x3 Thank you for writing this!
AntiSora chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Need more stories like this.

I'm sick of seeing Neku being the uke. He needs some more seme-time.
ephemeral.DELUSiON chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Oh, I liked that ending very much, now I did. xD

Cuteness, ye? xD I think so.
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