|Reviews for I need you just to breathe|
| XxX Fred Weasley's Wife XxX chapter 3 . 11/13/2009
cool! I think you could have made that last chapter a bit longer but it was still really good!
| shara chapter 3 . 10/20/2009
:( it was getting really good...why did it have to stop there why could u keep writing? plz if u ever get a chance finish it ur a very talented writer!
| vampiregurl chapter 3 . 10/7/2009
what do the volturi's want?
| ImmortalObsession chapter 3 . 6/18/2009
OMC! PLZ Continue update soon!
| Bambieyes1234 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
To be blunt you need a beta and your sentance's don't flow so well, I do like the story but you do need to sort it out.
| DBZZY chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
| No1Longer1using1account chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
Frakin Love It!)
| NicciC93 chapter 3 . 4/4/2009
Great story update soon. Love the fact the volturi come in to it can't wait to read what happens.
| Hedvig Alfdis chapter 3 . 3/31/2009
oh kidnap or something( i know not very creative)
cant wait for nxt chappy
| Kenai52503 chapter 3 . 3/30/2009
LOVE THE STORY!
| details-withheld chapter 3 . 3/21/2009
HOLY CRAP! If that blond bimbo is Tanya, I might just have to become an arsonist. Why are the Volturi there! Geez, I wanna hurt Edward right now.
| details-withheld chapter 2 . 3/21/2009
It's Alice isn't it. I knew it. The Culeens just HAD to come mess with Bella some more. Those jerks.
| details-withheld chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Well, I think you should keep writing. I think we've all wondered what would happen if Edward cheated on Bella. I just saw the moview for the first time today, and its for for Twilight NUBES! THEY LEFT SO MUCH STUFF OUT, AND NOW I'M INSANLY FRUSTRATED AND MAD!
| orange cotton candy chapter 3 . 2/17/2009
great story can't wait for the next chapter update soon
| pixidancer22 chapter 6 . 2/8/2009
Ok, I like this story, so get on the updating! Please:)