Reviews for A Deep Breath and a Heartbeat
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
A great story. Very well written.
xxPsychicSocksxx chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Great, completely beleivable.
XxXxDreamerxXxX chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
That is so wasome I can't even tell you how I feel...
Realynn8 chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I loved it, very well written. Characters captured perfectly. Well done.
Elinzanine Rosette chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
perfect. You really captured Alice and Jasper
HalfBloodHannah chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
that was really nice. :)
TypoKween chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I love that Jalice always has to be touching. You do know that you are on the verge of making me join a new fandom, right? LOL! This was a cute oneshot and like I said before having it in Edwards POV is total originality. You rule chica. ;)
justawritier chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
really cute :)
Bojangles78 chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
That was so good! Happy New Year for a few days' time :)