|Reviews for A Deep Breath and a Heartbeat|
| Angel.ChildAtHeart chapter 1 . 5/24
Aw I love the Jalice relationship descriptions and details
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2021
AWWWWWWWWWWW! This is just what Jasper and Alice's relationship is.
| liverno chapter 1 . 8/13/2019
| BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| xxPsychicSocksxx chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Great, completely beleivable.
| XxXxDreamerxXxX chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
That is so wasome I can't even tell you how I feel...
| Realynn8 chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I loved it, very well written. Characters captured perfectly. Well done.
| Elinzanine Rosette chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
perfect. You really captured Alice and Jasper
| HalfBloodHannah chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
that was really nice. :)
| TypoKween chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I love that Jalice always has to be touching. You do know that you are on the verge of making me join a new fandom, right? LOL! This was a cute oneshot and like I said before having it in Edwards POV is total originality. You rule chica. ;)
| justawritier chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
really cute :)
| Bojangles78 chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
That was so good! Happy New Year for a few days' time :)