Reviews for On the Way to Greatness
ArkhCthuul chapter 20 . 9/29
Gah, why did you abandon it right here? Why?
It was such a good fic...
Guest chapter 14 . 9/25
This chapter was pure Angst. I mean I get that you want things to be ominous biut every adult that's "adulting" around Harry is incredibly annoying and indecisive. They similtaneously expect too much of him and underestimate him. It's quite clear that he is being used and Dumbledore is making me increasingly angry. If he had put Harry in that same situation with Flower Power Attitude he'd have been dead. So him alluding to Harry not being pure anymore is kind of creepy.

Also I kind of assumed that Harry had sex with Susan in the previous chapter (while they were in the room of requirement) so Dumbledore alluding to purity was doubly weird.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/25
So I up until now I got everything Harry did on somw level, but I can't see Harry as someone who would buy a friend expensive gifts and stuff all the time. Having Padme reference that each time they interact makes her sound very vapid. I'm not sure how you want this relationship to be perceived.
Guest chapter 20 . 9/25
Gotta say this was a good read. It wasn't just superimposing a stereotypical slytherin Harry on top of canon, but real thought on how things might change. Loved it.
ArkhCthuul chapter 18 . 9/19
Interesting chapter, if a bit disjointed and rambling at times.
ArkhCthuul chapter 16 . 9/19
That was marvelously done!

Now let's make sure the stupid bore, a Dumbledore I mean, remembers to both give Harry the elder wand and the stone. :p
Niris chapter 20 . 9/19
One of the best story I ever read ! really hope you will update it some day.
Hank1967 chapter 20 . 9/18
Very interesting story! Well thought out. I hope you will continue it some day.
ArkhCthuul chapter 15 . 9/18
Ah, but Harry Potter can not feel good for longer than a few weeks, we all know that, don't we?

Might start a fic where this is different some day...
ArkhCthuul chapter 14 . 9/18
Truly excellent chapter.
Nough said.
Gendie01 chapter 14 . 9/17
please update
ArkhCthuul chapter 9 . 9/16
Oh, you tease... :p

Very well done chapter.
ArkhCthuul chapter 6 . 9/16
The amount of nonprotagonism is hurting the story, sadly.
ArkhCthuul chapter 4 . 9/15
OK, n that? That was brilliant! :)
ArkhCthuul chapter 3 . 9/15
A wee bit too little details, but not bad.
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