|Reviews for On the Way to Greatness|
| jhimenie.towers chapter 19 . 5h ago
Wonderful story! Looking forward to more! :-)
| GreenApril chapter 19 . 9h ago
I love this story and hope you finish it i just finished the last chapter when i put on pandora and the perfect song to match this story came on its call Walking In My Shoes by depech mode. I just had to share it with everyone who reads this because it makes me think of harrys position and how he has the best intentions but has no choice but to do morally ambiguious things due to his fated position in the middle of a conflict that should have had little to do with him. Sorry im rambling ill stop now.
| Scooby chapter 19 . 3/7
This chapter is all kinds of epic, Can't wait for the next.
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 1 . 3/6
just out of curiosity... what happened behind the scenes?
apparently quirrel didnt make it in the end... maybe flying reaper just killed him for failure at doing anything...
would be reasonable.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
I literally one shot this marvel of writing over the past 6 hours and I have to say that this story just had absolutely gripped me. I hope you are continuing to work on this piece but no matter what, thank you for this amazing read. Your writing style is close to the source but provides a very original feel. The lack of errors and presence of good grammar is also very refreshing.
| Empty Thoughts chapter 19 . 3/3
I find with some stories that I skim when reading. I'm not sure what it is with your story, but I read every single word. Probably because it's just so great. I hope you update soon :)
| Spartan360 chapter 19 . 2/21
Outstanding so far plz continue and update
| BlackRevenant chapter 9 . 2/20
I just did NOT like this chapter at all.
Rubbed me wrong all over.
Thanks for the ride though.
| BlackRevenant chapter 7 . 2/20
So. Is the topic with Pucey gonna come up again?
I tend to enjoy stories that start in 4th year. Its a vey VERY good divergence point, another being before Hogwarts and after 5th year tends to be a favorite too.
It'll be this year that makes or breaks this story for me. This is what I would have skipped ahead to read beforehand.
Will Harry come into his own? Or will he continue to walk this road that so obviously leads to his end?
| BlackRevenant chapter 6 . 2/20
Powerful chapter this one.
I love seeing Harry kinda flare yknow? Finding a drive for the anger in his heart, learning not to trust /any/ adult in this universe. They have given him no reason to, and every reason not to.
Also. I hate Snape. Probably always will. Him "redeeming himself" is a load of bullshit.
I hope to see some badass Harry soon, the fire is ther now... just no focus.
| BlackRevenant chapter 5 . 2/20
He faltered a little in this chapter.
But only really unbalanced people stay angry long. But the flow of this one was good too. Actually looking forward to the confrontation with Sirius.
| BlackRevenant chapter 4 . 2/20
Ok best chapter yet.
I enjoyed Harry's fury, even the indecisiveness behind it.
Malfoy hasn't done anything to deserve death yet, which is what I hope the hesitant nature of his rage is. The shit beat out of him? The fear of God put in him? Hell yea, but not death, not yet anyway.
Agusta reminds me abit of my Big Momma (great grandma) real oldschool, heavy on manners and severe at the bedt of times. But that woman would burn the world for hers.
| mightya chapter 19 . 2/20
Splendid, most amazing story. Please please please update soon! :)
| BlackRevenant chapter 3 . 2/20
I almost want to skip ahead a bit.
This timid Harry is getting on my nerves.
I know character and world building when I see it.
But Harry is in a freaking den of vipers! Half the appeal of a Slytherin!Harry is some viciousness to his normally passive qualities.
| BlackRevenant chapter 2 . 2/20
This was actually the moment I was waiting for.
Hopefully this gives Harry the leverage to shift the power balance.
Inhate a weak Harry. Saw enough of that in canon.