Gah, why did you abandon it right here? Why?
It was such a good fic...

This chapter was pure Angst. I mean I get that you want things to be ominous biut every adult that's "adulting" around Harry is incredibly annoying and indecisive. They similtaneously expect too much of him and underestimate him. It's quite clear that he is being used and Dumbledore is making me increasingly angry. If he had put Harry in that same situation with Flower Power Attitude he'd have been dead. So him alluding to Harry not being pure anymore is kind of creepy.

Also I kind of assumed that Harry had sex with Susan in the previous chapter (while they were in the room of requirement) so Dumbledore alluding to purity was doubly weird.

So I up until now I got everything Harry did on somw level, but I can't see Harry as someone who would buy a friend expensive gifts and stuff all the time. Having Padme reference that each time they interact makes her sound very vapid. I'm not sure how you want this relationship to be perceived.

Gotta say this was a good read. It wasn't just superimposing a stereotypical slytherin Harry on top of canon, but real thought on how things might change. Loved it.

Interesting chapter, if a bit disjointed and rambling at times.

That was marvelously done!

Now let's make sure the stupid bore, a Dumbledore I mean, remembers to both give Harry the elder wand and the stone. :p

One of the best story I ever read ! really hope you will update it some day.

Very interesting story! Well thought out. I hope you will continue it some day.

Ah, but Harry Potter can not feel good for longer than a few weeks, we all know that, don't we?

Might start a fic where this is different some day...

Truly excellent chapter.
Nough said.

please update

Oh, you tease... :p

Very well done chapter.

The amount of nonprotagonism is hurting the story, sadly.

OK, n that? That was brilliant! :)

A wee bit too little details, but not bad.