|Reviews for Miles From Your Home|
| echoing noise chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
THis definitly looks interesting. :) It's a nice step away from the traditional Reid-kidnapped-angst route. The writing style is straight-forward and well-done - many times I see authors going too far one way or the other. It's nice to see a balance.
Now, on to the actual events in the story. The flashback/memory was very well-written, I thought, even if Reid did seem a bit more hot-headed than he would be - you've given due warning and it doesn't seem too out of place, after all... he's in a coffin, a place where light is completly absent, worrying about suffocation and beginning to panic... no, a few swear words do not seem far-fetched at all. It does make me wonder if he will remain in this mood for the entire fic, or if it was only for that one bit that he was like that - I'm worried only because I think that kind of personality might cause a rift between him and the team, and right now I'm just very eager for him to get better. I'm sure, though, that it will be fine either way. He doesn't seem to drastically out of character in the first place, anways. :) It's good.
Speaking of panic, I am assuming this is what caused Reid to believe there were things burrowing into his stomach, because I cannot think of anything that would actually do that in real life. Hopefully this doesn't spell bad news for Reid - hallucinations while realizing you're going to die due to panic don't seem to be connected to his mother's illness, and I hope it isn't. I'm rambling, now - what I mean to say is that I didn't quite understand what happened in the coffin, and am getting impatient already, wanting to hear Reid explain it in his own words to one of the team. I'll have to wait for that, though, of course. Until then, I'll assume tht it was his panicked imaginiation.
Speaking of waiting, I have very low expectations that this fic will be updated. It has been three years, and your profile says nothing at all about it. I'll put this on alert, just in case, but if you wouldn't mind, would ou OM me your plans on updating? If it's on hiatus, I'd like to know, but if you've decided to leave it, I'd suggest putting it up for adoption... I *really* want to see what happens. :) Anyway... good job, but I'm really dissapointed that there isn't more. If you can, update soon, please. It's well-written and really interesting, and I think you will do a really great job with it. Thank you, and sorry for all the typos that are probably in the review!
| Lady Babette chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Wow so dark. I'll have to keep reading just to see what happens with my precious boy.
| xxxNOVAxxx chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
wow i love the beginning. Hurt by Johnny Cash. i love that song! keep going please.
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Gosh, what a frightening, frightening dream. Nice writing.
| ME chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Well, I guess you're never going to update, but this seems like an interesting story. I don't know. The whole coffin thing though - it sounds like ti could be a really cool crossover between Supernatural or any other show with vampires and other paranormal things.
| Spark Shark chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Interesting, i'd love to see where you're going with this. :)
| Stompy Bigfoot chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
i like !
| keira15 chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
hey just wanted to say this story seemed realy good and is dissapointed u didnt continue
| Sue1313 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
This first chapter was so good. I do hope you will finish it.
| Farrahmack chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Awesome! LOVED IT Ried rocks
| VacantAccount chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
:( I thought I had you on alert, had no idea this was posted (
Do I gotta tell you how much I loved it? Looking forward to all that angsty!Reid.
| KASEY64 chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
This is great. You are so descriptive. I really want to see what happened to Reid. That had to have been the worst experience anyone could have. If this chapter is short,(which I don't think it was)I can't wait to read the next chapters! Update when you can!
| tearbos chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
This is interesting so far. I really want to know what the hell happened to him now.
| Resurging Crisis chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
I love the way you described his feelings as much as what's happening physically.