Reviews for In My Mind, I Subconsciously Dream of You
umi ryuzzaki1 chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
good great awsome
Neko-Tenchi chapter 2 . 1/11/2015
More Hikaru/Lantis please!
xXkazewingsxX chapter 12 . 1/22/2013
Hmm..I like this story,but when you 'put your presence' in the story,it seems unprofessional. Of course, personally, I do quite like it, it adds a bit of humor as well truth. Riana,is the least to say,quite hateable, yet relatable. Your writing easy flowing and simple,nice and easy. As for the passionate moment at the end,was a perfect ending, it's final, it doesn't keep a reader thinking ' what happens next?' because you can already see and guess. I've got quite a liking to Clemi fanfics lately. This one,although,not my most favourite one, I still like it. Your A/N notes at the beginning and ends of each chapter add a bit of comedy and light to the story, while the story itself is dark. I think you could have really added more depth into this story, like more character development (though,harder because this is a fanfic) or the plot itself. All in all, I have to say I did enjoy this story,it's kept me reading it to the end,and doesn't bore.
bur bur chapter 12 . 6/12/2012
i love it
Mayuuyiiyuu chapter 12 . 5/21/2010
Haha love the epilogue TTTT

Man... Finally finished reading this huh...



Thank you very much

Thanks for making me shed tears then laugh out loud all of a sudden

Hope you made (and will make) more stories about Clef and Umi that are not too fluffy(and angsty please D lol it's okay if its not XD)


Thanks again
Mayuuyiiyuu chapter 11 . 5/21/2010


Hehe~! I'm glad it wasn't THAT fluffy 3

Hehe thanks again

Off to read the epilogue D
Mayuuyiiyuu chapter 10 . 5/21/2010
...YOU! -comes out from nowhere and tackles and glomps you all of a sudden-


-stands up and bows-

Thank you very much for making such a angsty and realistic fic ) This one is VERY different from the others and I like that!

Glad that FINALLY it's not like those angsty fics that turn fluffy and mushy mushy after the guy confesses so on so forth yada yada!...

Again THANK YOU!...

Haha you might have noticed that I reviewed this chap... Well it's because it's too good that I don't quite have the time to click that review button and write XD

But this chap really made me review and all XD

It was so FUNNY!...

Haha XD

Thanks for making my day

And thanks for making this story

Now I'm off to read the next chapter D

zRISC chapter 12 . 6/4/2009
nice story :D

consistent, well written :D
Graffiti My Soul chapter 12 . 5/27/2007
I swear this is the best Rayearth fic I've ever read. You should semd this to CLAMP and make them release a 3rd section of the manga.

Oh. My. God. -dies-

natsumi chapter 11 . 4/14/2007
hi there drkdemon..

i love your story..i've already read it before through my friend since my 3rd yr high school..and now i'm in my college years..i say to myself that i have to find your story because i really love it..and now finally, i was able to see it again..and read the last chapter(though last sweet scenes are not that good..') but still it is good!.. :D


Tifa chapter 12 . 12/18/2006
I love this fanfic!
Riiiceballe chapter 12 . 8/13/2006
Aw ! This was a wonderful fan-fic . I loved the endding . Hope you write more fan-fic's like this .
cookiemania789 chapter 12 . 5/14/2006

Too bad there's no sequel *sob*
Hardcore chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
I am now, I do confess, an absolute complete fan of this ship. GO UMI AND CLEF!

Maybe I should tone down on the enthusiasm... nah...
Cassi chapter 11 . 12/6/2005
OMG! It almost scared me to see you were gonna leave it just like that... But when I saw that chapter 12 was actully out I was releived... It's a really good fic! I think CLAMP should turn it into to a managa o.O... and... wah* how can you hate Inu-yasha... *cries* This must be the most extremely late review of all time XD... But I love Umi and Clef so much, I just had to review...

P.S, Please write another one about Clef and Umi, but next time... add some lust muhahahahahahaha... Or right one on Lantis/Eagle... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... *Get's hit in the head by everyone to shut up*
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