|Reviews for My Sister Rosalie, Book I: Captor|
| avalynnelfe chapter 41 . 2/9
Here I was, happy about a happy chapter, and then...
| avalynnelfe chapter 40 . 2/7
I'm sorry if I'm progressing so slowly, but every day I manage to read more than 3-5 chapters is a day worthy of celebration. meaning, they are not that frequent at the moment. bit, on to the story. are you sure Bella isn't suffering from a form of Stockholm syndrome? I mean, yes, Rosalie is kind to her and does this ga she doesn't have to, but if she hadn't kidnapped Bella in the first place, all of that wouldn't even be necessary... also, while I don't think Bella is Lizzy, I do think Bella swan isn't all there is to her. also, that mirror thing really surprised me. I got that Bella wasn't the most confident person in the world (but then again, who would be in the presence of Rosalie Hale?) but at least the way the story is told she does seem a little more sure of herself. on the other hand, I'm glad she isn't just constantly pitying herself or something like that, cause that would get very exhausting to read very quickly. I think. well, whatever. however long it may take me, I will finish this story, just as I will be leaving the occasional review on the way.
| avalynnelfe chapter 22 . 2/4
so, in the last three days I at least got until here, even though I had literally no time. my weekend is packed as well, but I am finding the time to continue reading your wonderful story. there are no other words for it than perfect, or at least as close to perfect as one can get. it's intriguing, it's well written and you never know what is coming next. especially the way you write Rosalie is absolutely in character, consistent and confusing and understandable in one. I'm off to the next chapter then, bye
| avalynnelfe chapter 7 . 2/1
I got until here, even though I have to admit I didn't read all the chapter summaries, in part because I didn't really follow after a while, but mostly because I didn't want to spoiler myself... I hope you will take this as a compliment, your writing had definitely improved over the last right years! it's still good, but not great, like it is now. still, I'm very much looking forward to the journey I'm about to be taken on. I love the setting. I love the characterization so far. I like that Bella is questioning herself, and I have to admit, I'm wondering how long it will take her to figure out her feelings for Edward and 'LillianD I have to sleep now, as there is such a thing as school tomorrow for which I have to get up WAY too early, but I will be back!
| CarlieZA chapter 83 . 11/9/2016
Ohhh yes! finally! I've been waiting for this all this time! it was definitely worth it! nice job!
| CarlieZA chapter 23 . 11/1/2016
owww! the Emmett reference and your note are so perfect! dang it! I just realized I'm a big though teddy bear thanks to you! haha btw I'm loving this!
| pandora2945 chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
Hi there, your story came up in a search i did, and it was the pairing and the length of it that got me started reading your first story, i read a lot of fan fiction but i have got to say yours is so far one of the best i read, i managed to read your first story in 2 nights and it would of been less if it wasn't for the fact i had to work! you managed to make me cry, laugh and had me trying to guess how it turns out. i cant wait to read more of this story. so thanks very much for being an awesome author!
| ForestValentine chapter 41 . 7/22/2016
I want to write a review for this story correctly but it may still come out strange so forgive me. This story is fantastic, I really appreciate how you get so into character and use correct facts for things happening in this storie's era. Your able to portray these character and describe the scene to a extent where I feel like I'm watching it happen. excellent work!... forgive my foul language for a moment but i'm reading this back and I think I sound like a kiss ass, that wasn't the goal I just really wanted you to know how much i like your story. So yeah thanks for posting it! P.S. I know you weren't aiming for this but my little sister loved the toad in the hole recipe, it was cool being able take usable info from a fanfiction and use it in real life so for one last time. thanks! -FV
| YuriForever chapter 92 . 6/26/2016
That's it? THAT'S IT?! Dude, i can't, i need more. Please, i might die. This story is beautiful.
| YuriForever chapter 58 . 6/24/2016
| YuriForever chapter 54 . 6/24/2016
I'm seriously loving this story. The pacing is slow, yes, but definitely no boring parts. I also love how long this story is, unlike others that leave you hanging. Looking forward to more of your works!
| TaniadaSilva chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
I have read many stories on a different site and stumbled across some really good twilight stories that prompted me to use this site to see what other ones I could find to read. With your story it was very well put together and held a lot of well thought out detail which is something that I love finding in a story because some stories are very much rushed and not put together well. I also loved how you kept Rosalie's character from the original twilight stories.
this story has been added to my favourites because it was well deserved
| kamonwan9952 chapter 21 . 2/3/2016
uhrg what the fck is this fluff story that can almost kill me with its sweetness and funny as heck moments, this is so damned good! i thought it was going to be angsty as fuck but ayy this is good too, lols. nice ending at the chapter ;D
| kamonwan9952 chapter 15 . 2/3/2016
fucking hilarious chapter this one, just ohgod i cant XDD best pov ever
| kamonwan9952 chapter 2 . 2/3/2016
ohgod, ok im giving this story a try. i have been eyeing this story a while but never gave in..cause yh im totally rosella-shipper and thought this was some family story (maybe it is?) but i checked out some reviews and ..well here i am 422k story.. ohdamn lets start the timer and see how long it takes me to finish this. anyways this was a great chapter to start with. i somewhat likes the way they talk here XD