|Reviews for My Sister Rosalie, Book I: Captor|
| A Eternity Of Nonchalance chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
| WildImagination28 chapter 55 . 7/14/2011
wow this story is deffinitely very different and interesting! It plays with my emotions and i like that. I see its been a year since its been updated and was wondering if u were going to pick it back up sumtime? I hope so, its caught my attention and now i want more lol. Excellent story, i just hope there is more )
| xBBx chapter 55 . 6/27/2011
Is this story not being finished? 'Cause that would suck, it's worth completing.
| chst chapter 23 . 6/6/2011
| Im a Skyscraper chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
| catastrophe86 chapter 55 . 4/29/2011
I never reviewed your story :) I'm sorry. I'm one of those read and dash types - indulging myself on wonderful stories without stopping to show my gratitude or admiration.
I found this story, which has come to be known as the gem of Rosalie/Bella fics in my mind, sometime last year and have since read through it, in its entirety, four times. I can't get over the amount of care and thought that went into this story. It's amazing, really.
I know it's not finished, though people may start to question this since you haven't updated in over a year, but I know there's more to the story. I only hope one day I'll be able to drool over the ending as well :) I understand, though. Things come up, life gets hectic.. it happens.
I just wanted to be sure to let you know what a fantastic job you did here. I didn't review every chapter, but that doesn't make it any less meaningful. Thank you for giving us this :)
| wowzzer chapter 55 . 2/18/2011
Wow. It's hard to believe that this is actually the last chapter (that's been updated) and that i managed to get here. It did seem like there was a never ending list of chapters, and i had kind of wished this day would never come... Haha! But seriously, i SO enjoyed reading this so far. I just love their dynamics. I'm compelled to read, and read by their bickering, sarcasm, Bella's crazy thoughts, and what-not. It's sometimes rather hilarious and i love that too. I kind of feel at a loss as to what to do now :/
Also, i can't say i'm not embarrassed that i haven't reviewed any of the other chapters... sorry!
Yeah, so... great story :)
| lamni chapter 6 . 1/19/2011
Seeing Bella collect newspapers to put the facts together just made think how life's easier today with facebook, twitter and the rest of these kind of sites, thank god!
So Bella is planning to chat with Rosalie, about her secret life before coming to this town, when she couldn't even form 3 sentences the first time they met...right! good luck brave girl.
Thanks for sharing.
| lamni chapter 5 . 1/19/2011
Bella's reaction to Rosalie's beauty was comic and completely understandable, i think most people can relate to that, even Bella being straigth, nothing beats a beautiful girl!
Thanks for sharing
| lamni chapter 4 . 1/19/2011
I'm anxious to see Bella and Rosalie's first encounter.
Thanks for sharing.
| lamni chapter 3 . 1/19/2011
This was a nice beginning, i hope the next chapters include first hand dialogues, even if the author describe their subjects (as you told the readers here, that they liked to talk about literature)i feel as if i lost a huge part of how their interaction went like )
Thanks for sharing
| Twigon Halolover chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
This looks really good, but is this going to be a Rosalie/Bella pairing? I guess the only way to find out is to read it.
| aquarius127 chapter 55 . 9/27/2010
please update this story soon or atleast promise that it will be updated sometime in the future. how many books are you planning to write? either way continue please i absolutely love this story! :)
| Condor green chapter 54 . 7/17/2010
You know, after reading this through for a second time, I noticed that the Bella in this story appears to suffer from really intense case of Stockholm
Syndrome. Was this on purpose?
I hope to see this continued at some point in the future(can't really tell from you profile if this is being continued).
| Avarenda chapter 5 . 7/2/2010
I enjoyed how Bella described Rosalie in this chapter. Whats ironic, is the very way in which she seemed to describe Rose, spoke a little of the attraction she may have felt for her. Although, when you have someone as beautiful as Rose simply EXISTING; It would probably be impossible for any gender not to feel at least a slight attraction.
You wax so poetically about Rosalie, especially her eyes, which we all know is supposed to be the window to the soul.
Of course, we all know what Rose is thinking when she first see's Bella. Even if RLT didn't exist, it seems fairly obvious.
'This is the girl i was rejected for? This plain little thing? She's obviously not very eloquent is she?' Yet. Yet, she does seem to appreciate the effort on Bella's half to offer assistance, even if the offer only brings her sorrow for her lost humanity.
In truth, Bella had every reason to feel overwhelmed. It's not every day you meet the most beautiful woman in the world. Who seems to hate you.
Ironically, Bella is even more tongue tied around Rose than she is Edward. Bella will definitly think twice before facing 'Lillian Hale' again.
Although, really. What was Carlisle thinking, taking Rose's last name? Could that be any more suspicious? Although, knowing Rose, and her pride in her heritage, she probably absolutely refused to change her last name. So the Cullen's were forced to play along.
Hmm, now i wonder, in canon, if Rose has ever had a last name other than Hale. Since she refuses to take the Cullen name. Was Rose ever a Rosalie Witlock, when she pretended Jazz was her twin? Somehow i doubt she was ever a 'Rosalie Masen'. In fact, I'd bet she'd pitch a fit if it was even insinuated.
At any rate, good chapter.