|Reviews for My Sister Rosalie, Book I: Captor|
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 26 . 8/25/2009
Note to Rosalie - If you ever feel the need to cook perfect steak for another human girl, look me up.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 25 . 8/25/2009
The part I found the most ironic in this chapter is when Bella threatens to kill DEATH, how is that even possible? Oh well.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 24 . 8/25/2009
Well, Bella is pretty observant about many things, but she misses all the important stuff.
Of course Rose loves her, at least in some way shape or form or she would have just let her die one of the many times death has courted Bella already. Really, Bella is pretty much in need of constant attention at this point, anyway, guess I'll just read on to see how it progresses.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 23 . 8/25/2009
"I had my very own personal — vindictive — guardian vampire." Hm...I really wish I had one of them, maybe I should look around, or like, something.
Anyway, I loved Bella's epiphany and her description of Rosalie's perfect match - Emmett.
I totally love Emmie Bear, he is by far and wide the best man...um...vamp in the series, and it does surprise me how much he is overlooked, hopefully Bella will be able to hook Rose up with him in this story, that would be too amazing.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 22 . 8/24/2009
wow - what a terrifying dream. Where is Rose? Surely she'll save Bella, just in time, again.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 21 . 8/24/2009
Hm...Surely Bella doesn't die of pneumonia just yet, where would the fun in that be.
I am glad they have cleared the air a little bit and are forming a true relationship, I just wish it wasn't so one sided. Bella needs to hurry through her cycle so Rose can actually breathe and talk around her.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 16 . 8/24/2009
Such a powerful chapter. I have yet to read another story in which we get such an amazing look into the workings of Rosalie's mind. Thank you.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 15 . 8/24/2009
I am so curious - why is Rosalie so upset? She thought Bella knew before, and now she knows that she does. Rose isn't exactly being secretive about her draw towards blood, nor her performance of physical tasks that no mortal can, oh well...guess I'll read on to find out.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 14 . 8/24/2009
Well, it's so nice to see how tender Rosalie can be...almost maternal in the way she is taking care of Bella, that is, until Bella decides she can no longer keep her mouth shut and spills her latest theory - it just happens that she is right this time.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 13 . 8/24/2009
This is a scenario I have often wondered about, what would the reaction be when Bella had her time of the month around a house full of vampires. Rose's reaction is the first time I have seen it addressed.
| Citrus Fever chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
Hey there! I've finally gotten to your story! Aren't you happy? Anyway I liked how you sorta set up the story like in the first "chapter". It has a good start. And like you advised, I'll take this story one chapter at a time. My sincerest apologies for taking do long, man. :)
I Have Cullenism
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 11 . 8/21/2009
Well - not what I thought was coming, but very attention grabbing anyway. I am really looking forward to their conversations. From what I gather, Rosalie thinks Bella knows they are vamps and she doesn't...yet anyway. I must go for now, but will read more in a while - I am so intrigued.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 10 . 8/21/2009
Oh my. Obviously Bella doesn't realize that, in the heat of the moment, she called her Rosalie by mistake. What the heck. Surely Rose doesn't kill her, because there wouldn't be much of a story after that - but I've gotta' go on to the next chapter to find out what's gonna' happen.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 8 . 8/21/2009
You know, I really am not supposed to be laughing out loud at work, my co-workers think I'm going nuts - but oh well.
I just realized why this story appeals to me so much. It is like Little House on the Prairie meets Nancy Drew. There are also so many hilarious thoughts/comments throughout as well.
Bella - she is so observant yet oddly naive about many things. I can't wait to see how or when she asks all the questions she needs to ask, and what the reaction will be...Guess I'll have to read on to find out.
| twilighter4ever-ec4e chapter 7 . 8/20/2009
Well, I suppose I should get back to work now, I'll read more tomorrow.
Loved this chapter. Bella is quite tenacious isn't she?