|Reviews for Will No One Save Me: The Broken Strawberry|
| greenwings33 chapter 3 . 1/17/2014
Don't break him please
| RaneyLee chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
lol I found the original version of this first and have ended up reading both versions of this. The first one is good, but this one is a proof of your improved skills. :) This one has more depth to the plotline and gives more of a feel of whats going on with all the characters as a whole. And I find it amazingly cute that Toshiro can't hold his liquor. lol poor Captain. But the little end tiblits are aborable and reminds me of the Illustrated Guide to Soul Reapers. lol And omg my spelling seems to suck something terrible or my chrome is acting a fool.. lol anyway, i'll be watching and waiting for the next chapter!
| evilblackfirefox chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
i hope u update soon. i luv the story
| Diamondstar the Seeker chapter 3 . 5/2/2012
Please, tell me your going to continue, please, I want to know what happens next.
| Bloodyrose23 chapter 3 . 4/20/2012
PLEASE MAKE MORE YOUR STORIES ARE SO GOOD DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY ;)
| xxichigoXyaoixxx chapter 3 . 10/8/2011
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz! update!
i need you story for air!
| zombieduckielol chapter 3 . 10/8/2011
i love your story so far and feel really sorry for ichigo (
plz write more i want to know what happens!
| IHeartBlood chapter 3 . 10/4/2011
look i know its been a long time since you published, but plz could you write chapter 4!
plz plz plz plz it would mean so much and i really love this story!
| piedad carrillo chapter 3 . 5/26/2011
when are you going to continue this story i reall like the story will no one save me: the broken strawberry
| Ulquiorra-quatro chapter 3 . 3/25/2011
I love it! The plot is so amazing, I can't help but crave for more. Please update soon! It's been 2 years or so, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Mioroa chapter 3 . 12/30/2010
Aw. Poor Ichi-kun...I like the part where Ishida, Sado, and Inoue told Ichi-kun to leave them alone; really pushes the story forward!
You said you had, like, the next six chapters somewhat completed, so...When are you gonna be posting? It's been past a year..._"
Can't wait fer the next chapters!
| afallenheart chapter 3 . 3/6/2010
Please update as soon as possible!
| piedad carrillo chapter 3 . 2/12/2010
i liked it please update soon
| ichigos future wife chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
wow. very well writen. I hope you update soon...
| 4325341 chapter 3 . 9/4/2009
This was interesting - despite the whole betrayal thing, all of the characters were kept to their personalities - I really liked it!
This was really fun to read - thanks!