Reviews for He's So Shy
motchi chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is a really cute story!

I'll admit, Cloud's at the bottom of my list of leading men. Too often, people (Square-Enix included) paint him as this self-absorbed, emo asshole who's either mooning after Aerith or giving Tifa the wishy-washy act. It gets old.

I rarely read fanfic, but I sometimes catch myself looking for light-hearted Cloud fics, and this fits the bill. First, I like that he makes an effort to come home early. I like that he doesn't beat himself up for being late. And I like that he's human enough to sneak cookies.

Your Tifa is a little too perky for my tastes, but that's a personal preference. I do like that she doesn't let him get away at the end, that she doesn't turn all blushing and shy. A Tifa who goes after what she wants is a good thing. Same with Cloud.

Keep up the good fight!
TiffanyLockheart chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
D'aw xD
vLuna chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Oh wow, that was absolutely cute :)
Fairheartstrife chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
This was very cute. I liked Cloud's wandering eyes. ;)
pangpond chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Wow! Cloud look so cute in this story lol I like it! _

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