Really interesting beginning and I'm curious what will happen in the future, because it is not too popular pairing, I don't think that I've even read any story with both of them. Therefore, I'm truly looking forward to reading the rest of your history. I love the way in which you pictured Harry: sweet and little, but with some character - I loved him especially during his talk with Cedric. And Marcus... When I think about him, I can only imagine the actor who played him in the film, and he wasn't too handsome. But look isn't the most important, right? Oh, I forgot... It was really great how Marcus tried to help Harry with his stress. And I think, I'm rambling again, so... Waiting for the next part!

I was just going to ignore the 'New Story' email and keep reading my Joker/Batsy slash, but the pairing made me look twice. How interesting! I love what you've written so far, and know that no matter what you'll do a great job. :]

Hermione was great in this chapter. XD