|Reviews for Clean as Sin|
| Farky-fark and the Munky Bunch chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
That was...mind blowing...
I felt kind of weird reading What Time We Have Left first and then coming here to read when they first met, but whatever, that's not a big deal.
I'm pretty much a fan of any couple, but I do really like these guys. You write them well.
| GrowlingPeanut chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
So sexy in a mechanical way.
After writing romance between Cybertronian lovers, humans aren't nearly as interesting anymore...
You have a gift with these scenes. Both fighting and loving. The descriptions make me feel like I'm part of whatever's going on. Wonderful!
| 1bloodtempest chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Wow... this is definitely the wild side of the bots... Is that ring big enough for a bot to transform during the match?
Starscream doesn't change... but considering the attitudes of the femmes in the ring, I don't think that either of them would be "an easy bot to manipulate." Neither Siphon nor Flamewar would have made it to that round in the ring if they were easy to manipulate if they wanted to earn the position of the Commander of the Femme Division. I think Starscream's just disillusioned about the whole thing... xP
Haha wow, the Seekers must love looking absolutely perfect and spotless. Now I wonder how many Seekers there are, aside from the primary trine...
Flamewar and Barricade fit so well, and their personalities clashed so violently over their connection - it's just a random thought of mine here, but I feel that the storm created from their joining could match the storm between Prowl and Jazz. xP Just a thought. ;)
| Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Intense, nicely dark and delicious. One of my favorite combinations. XD
| i-love-me-some-leggy-poo chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
My goodness, that was amazingly written. And incredibly hot. :fans self:
| Twospotz chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Gosh, bring me a fire hose, I think my heart is aflame. Wow, the word intense do not cover the story at all. Searing would be more like it.
| varsitylove16 chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
rawr! that was a fiery little scene between the two 'cons. me likey. haha
| ladytecuma chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
[fans self] This is sexy as hell. Absoultely, postively, sexy as hell. Flamewar bit off a bit more than she could chew with Barricade, huh? xD
| Violetlight chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Wow. I don't know how you do it, Hearts, but you always write such intense sex scenes, without taking away from the overall storyline of your world. You really are an expert at pwp - that is, Porn *With* Plot.
Both Flamewar and Barricade are completely in synch with your protrayals later on in your timeline - unreletingly vicious with each other, yet with an almost-mystical understanding between them. It's a great setup to their future relationship. Excellent foreshadowing.
I was kind of surprised, kind of not to discover that Flamewar was a preprogram, like Prowl. Just a suggestion, but perhaps that can be a source of her aminousity towards a certain femme who did have the priveliege of a sparklinghood *hint hint*. Anyway, it's always cool to find out more about her past. I'm really enjoying how you've taken a canon character, though one that has almost nothing written about her, and have really brought her to life. Nicely done!
| Lecidre chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Oh... oh... oh my God! *squeals* Goodness, you have no idea how I worship this present... I LOVE IT! I adore it with all my heart! Gosh, I really wish I could find an ultimate word or a very special phrase to describe how wonderful this fic is... I've already read this three times and I still can't tear my eyes off my computer screen. I just love it to pieces!
The death ring part in the very begining of this story has totally left me speechless. The deadly duel scene is extremely breath-taking - I almost forgot how to breathe when I saw Flamewar fight furiously against Siphon. I was so worried about Flamewar's well being when Siphon's weapon pierce through her shoulder... And wow, look at these femmes - they really fought like crazy women! I know Sunstreaker could become a wild berserker when he fights in death ring, but I have to say that Flamewar may be much more scary than that golden mech when it comes to fight and kill. No wonder she won the position of "Commander of the Femme Division" at last - I have no doubt that she is the most powerful and the toughest femme among the Decepticon ranks. Although Megatron isn't a main character in this one-shot, I could still feel how intimidating the Decepticon leader looked. The way you depicted the expressions of Megatron, Soundwave and Starscream really amazed me - they're not even the important roles here in this fic, but I was fascinated by their presence and reactions while reading the story. Their every move and act fit their characters so well!
Then here goes the wash racks part. It's such a brilliant idea to held a party at this place! I've never thought a simple place like that could be a nice spot for celebration, but since it's the cleanest place in the whole Decepticon base, then it would be the best place for all the joys. Who wants to drink the delicious high-grade in a place which looks like filthy junk heap, anyway? And my heart skipped a bit when I saw Moonfly and Nightshade among the Decepticon femmes. They only appeared for a short while, though, but it's still good to see some old familiar faces.
And here comes the best part of this fic... the hottest Barricade/Flamewar sex scene on Cybertron! Oh dear, my laptop nearly melted because of the sinfully-and-extremely-hot interfacing robot sex... How could they be this HOT? The way you wrote Barricade and Flamewar's first encounter is so wonderfully done, and my eyes were totally glued to my screen when I saw them being left alone in the wash racks. I became a Barricade/Flamewar supporter when I first read "What Time We Have Left", then I became a huge fan of this pairing after reading "As We Come Together"... and now I've become a super crazy fan for this pair of Decepticon lovers! I especially love the way you described Barricade's personality - he might look obedient, but he's actually a wild beast who only lurks behind that pitch black armour. Only a tough femme like Flamewar could deal with his vicious beast part, and only a strong mech like Barricade could satisfy Flamewar's needs. They're meant for each other. Oh, and I really like the idea of Barricade being the Guardian in the past. Maybe it sounds a little silly, but the mere thought of Barricade chasing those younglings at the Centaurie Tetrax Youth Sector somehow made my heart feel so warm and touched... Who knows? Maybe he could become a good father if he and Flamewar have their own younglings in the future. *smiles*
Now I bet the black mech would be more than happy to help cleaning Flamewar's body afterwards. To be honest, it's really a dreamy job for all the Decepticon mechs, since their femme commander is such a gorgeous femme. It's an enjoyment indeed to stay with the said beautiful femme in the wash racks and touch her frame that intimately... Well, since Barricade has already claimed the job, then all the other Decepticon mechs would have to keep the fantastic dream as their own secrets, or they would have to face Flamewar or Barricade's wrath and join the Matrix earlier. XD
This is the best gift I could have ever asked for. Thank you so, so much for writing this, hon! This one-shot is priceless! I really treasure it. I can't thank you enough for writing this fabulous one-shot for me! Thank you so much!
Merry Belated Christmas, sweetie! And wish you a Happy New Year, too! *hugs*
| theshadowcat chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
| Chloo chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I think I'm one of those people. Who knew they could make such a steamy couple? XD
| Bunnylass chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Hot DAMN! I don't think I blinked once while I was reading this fic...I was just...WOW! Double wowzers wow! This was an absolutely sensational fic! :D I'm blown away and just...Grinning!
The beginning with the fight was BRUTAL! And so fantastically written and descriptive, I was cringing and wincing while I read! And the best bit of that part, was the reference to Sunstreaker. Of his own thirst for the ring. Incredible brilliant :D
Lol, and what an awesome idea of them partying in the wash racks! I've never imagined or heard of that before. Although, I wouldn't be surprised. You have come up with some of the most brilliant and unique thoughts, ideas and suggestions I've ever read.
But the part with Barricade...*shakes foggy head* I thought my monitor was going to melt with how scorching and HOT that was! I mean...that was one of the most intense scenes with the bots, I have ever read! Barricade and Flamewar really do make the most...incredible couple! 100% so :D
I just...gah! WOW! Amazingly PERFECT! Another fantastic fic under your belt. Thank you so much! *Bows* You rock! I hope you had a good Christmas...All the best for the New Year!
One more time...WOW!
| Silveriss chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
You'd figure those two would be intense and, indeed, they were. *smirks*
| Bluebird Soaring chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Sounds like an interesting couple ) And femmes partying in the wash racks for the win! I love the intensity of these two characters. They are now at the top of my list of Cons )