Reviews for Veil of Apathy
fluffykitty12 chapter 1 . 1/4
Gorgeous fic! :)
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
u should make another where Roy finds out why Ed freaked out. That would be awesome! Super sweet story btw.
LadyOfBirds chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
*SQUEALS MORE* I love all your stories. ALL OF THEM. AS LONG AS THEY'RE IN FANDOMS THAT I LIKE. But Ed and Roy are so cute though and you're so good at writing cute things that are probably sad too but i'm too excited to be sad.
android727 chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
This was so great and gutwrenching (God I never thought I would use those two words in the same sentence!) but it hit me right in the feels! great job -Reem
ZakuroU chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Loved it so much! Really! I was dying to find out what was going to happen reading each sentence!
CastheSassmaster chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I liked it a lot :)
VampireFrootloopsRule chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This was dark, but I liked it. Curious, though. How would anyone else have that transmutation circle? Ed made it up with Alphonse. And where is Alphonse? Just questions I have
Victorious-Mind chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Awww That was really adorable! I knew something like that would happen one time or another and you did it!
Aleca chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
That was really good.

I hope you do more like it!
SoullessElric chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Hello again! I'm gonna read your FMA stories, so look forward to more reviews and stuff. :3

I really liked the idea of this piece. Have you seen episode 8 of the 2003 anime? The one with human Barry the chopper? I've always wished FMA elaborated more on how Ed reacts to reminders of his past, like him fainting after seeing a chopped up woman in that episode. This story is equally good or even better than that scene. The writing itself is wonderful, your tone is really clear throughout the whole thing, and the changes in mood are very clear. The gory details are much appreciated, as is the Parental!RoyEd. Please reply! :D
increak96 chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
AWESOME! XD That was really awesome love it lots! I've always wanted to do a Parental!RoyEd fic about that scene where he passes out when he sees the body, but this was WAY better than anything I could come up with! BRAVO!
Aubrey-Sky-Blue chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I liked it!

Keep up the great work!
Radon65 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Good description of the corpse and of Ed throwing up - I'm not sure why they needed him to look at it again, since he'd already determined it was human transmutation, he should have just told them. Also, if Gran had kicked him like that, there could have been recriminations. But I like the fact that Mustang defended him, at the same time managing to remain objective. Pretty good characterization all around.
lotus-bugxm9 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Dark story o.O ...i loved it!
Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
this must be a way way late review, but good job anyways! it was excellent!
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