Reviews for Instantaneous
insubordinationfreak chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
That was hot, wind up the skirt.
atheneblue chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Cool! I like the stuttering feel (slow-fast-slow-fast). -ab
The Confused One chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Aww. So very sweet. I love it. :) I'm so glad he told her how he felt. :) They deserve to be happy together. Great work.
artemiscynthia chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Reading this makes me see those things in my head. Like in a blurry, wonderful dream. I almost feel the rush and the blurrines they seem to be experiencing. And nice to think Alex in a skirt. Anyway,God bless the wind for all this.
untapdtreasure chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
wow. you have an elegant way with words that i'm always going to be jealous of. this was beautifully perfect.
rindy713 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
wow, i like this! interesting pacing. breathless. i love how he knows he loves her, and how they seize the moment.
Sparklystuff chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
really nicely written! I like this very much.
Humor In A Bittersweet Life chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I couldn't breath reading that ... wow!
superfelix chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Oh dear..this is a masterpiece...I love it so much.

Wonderful written, perfect use of the challenge theme.

Bobby, just hold her forever...mhm.