I reread this recently from my favorites, and just now, read again the first chapter from Ronan's perspective. I can't help but think about how different things would have been if Ronan HAD been able to get into that failing section with Teyla and John. That extra person on the surface to watch their backs would have changed A LOT. Would have made things easier in a lot of ways, although they then would have had to find that much more food and water. But the course of JT's relationship probably would have been completely different.

Anyway, if I haven't said it before, this is such a great story. Amazing job, and thanks for sharing.

I have loved this story for the third time now...thank you for it so very much. It's in my top ten for sure. LOVE IT! Hope you are well?

excellent story. extremely written, exciting, romantic, vicious villians, and heroic heros. loved it. wish violet eyes had lived. still one of the best jeyla adventure stories ever. thank you for sharing your great talent.

their thoughts and actions are sooo beautiful thank you.

This is the 3rd time I’ve read Lost! It’s a favorite. I’d love to have a story or two that deal with the birth of Elizabeth and Jake and also what happens to a John after Jakes birth. You mention in Mother, Warrior, Wife that he was injured severely when Jake was infant... we need closure!

10 years later here I am to say thank you for this story!

too awesome. thank you for a wonderful, beauiful, engaging story.

EXCELLENT. very mature adult reolution. impeccable prose and novel worthy writing.

there it is. grasp it my underated, brilliant radek.

HOPE!

ooooohhhh my i am on the edge of my seat.

jealous much. shame. he should be glad someone is with Teyla.

can not stand thr ioa.

john is so noble, brave and sweet

hope they found some sort of safe haven again.